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The MC was reborn in a fusion world of TV series and Movies in America.
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This fanfiction has a lot of potential. unfortunately, the Author is crippling it, and here's why. 1) Chat GPT: I don't mind Authors using 'Chat GPT' to help them write and fix grammar or sentence structure; what I do mind is just letting the machine do all the work and then only changing a single line. You've constantly repeated lines and thoughts of Alex like always being greatful or thanking someone or saying learning this will help me look at a culture completely differently and stuff like that over and over again. We don't need to be told that constantly. 2) Dioluge: It's dry; at some moments, it's okay, but overall, it just hashes and repeats, saying they had a conversation and feeling closer to the person because of said conversation. I don't know if you've watched all the shows you're adding or just read the wiki, but if it's that later, I suggest you do some watching. 3) Missed Opportunity: I'll give an example; in one of the chapters, you said Alex and Harvey helped on a case but then skipped everything and just said hey, they did amazing. Okay...so what did they do that was good? How did they perform, there could have been a chapter dedicated to their first-ever case, but you just skipped past it completely. Those are the three main problems I see with this fanfiction so far. But just because It's not my cup of tea doesn't mean it's not yours. Give it a chance; who knows, you might like it.
Está muy bien espero que siga así y que las actualizaciones sean continua .......................................................................................
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Muito Bom, so não dou 5 estrelas lor ter achado o desenvolvimento do romance muito apressado. Do resto estou gostando bastante , espero ver mais series envolvidas na história
Great story my friend, Hope you don't drop it. Looking forward to an update. Found it very engaging other stories similar to this is just full of smut but this actually has a plot great.
It's too early to tell where this will really go but it has started well and I will be reading as it continues. Some parts feel ChatGPT-ish but the dialogue is really good so its not a big deal.