Hmm, hmm. This is more interesting than I thought. Obviously, it's all caused by the story-telling, which I can say is pretty good. Overall, I like it, and I'm really looking forward to how he can bring this story into the next chapter.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
eyyy, i found another pemaloe here. great story btw, its easy to read for me. i hope you will continue this story.