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A boy from an alternative world discovers unexpected abilities. With their help he manages to escape death and find himself in one of the many worlds once connected by the Conjunction of Spheres.
MC is not reborn in the usual sense, he has the Elder Blood (there is a justification in the beginning).

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Quadan

While the story is above average, writing needs heavy editing.

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PartyCannonPirate

I love the premise and the idea would honestly love to read it but I could not get past the beginning of the second chapter the writing quality is migraine inducing to try to read it's obvious English is not their first language there's a lot of run-on paragraphs that almost make no sense with some of the words and positioning of the phrases I do honestly wish it was easier to read cuz it seems interesting

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Slygreen

The story seems interesting, but it fails in the writing, even more so since I translate it into Spanish, so the more poorly written it is, the less it is understood.

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SirWolfT1

so far its alright, editing and possible autocorrect are the only problems ive had

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ShieldMastra

Not readable bad language witches instead of witches some gibberish

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lohith9317

very good. I always like it when the mc is a mage and i hope he will do some research and have some uniqueness to his magic like some unique space magic, absolute defence or to bind enemies in space box or something.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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