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The system of the forsaken

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作者: Kenny1243

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When the world turns in to chaos as a screen appears and people are forced to make decisions to gain power or lose the chance to and become pray.

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The concept of this is great and the execution is great, but thats all it is. There's no chapter updates, so people wont read it. Mate, I appreciate you loving my novel, so I will help you here. This book has SOOO much potential, but if you don't put any effort into it, nobody will read it. The concept of light and dark systems is incredibly unique and could go far. I hope you read this and continue updating it, because people wont be able to see it until around 4,000 words. Thats when webnovel accepts it as a novel and starts showing it to people. but even then people wont read it until around 10 chapters. I truly hope you read this and continue this book, because it has potential to be at the top

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