/ Fantasy / The supreme mage from the land of the Little People
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The Demon from Beyond the Domain descends, and the fate of Blue Star hangs in the balance. Cheng Li, like many other young people, bears the heavy responsibility of saving Blue Star and sets out to seek external support in the thousands of different worlds. However, when Cheng Li successfully travels through, he discovers that this world is a little bit different.... Congratulations, Host, on hatching the 'Shit Mud Clan Right Arm.' Would you like to proceed with the stitching? You want me to spray shit? Go back to where you came from. Congratulations, Host, on hatching the 'Titan Magic Immunity Heart.' Would you like to proceed with the stitching? Who was it that said they would reward me with a forbidden curse just now? Come on, I'm standing right here, do your worst. Congratulations, Host, on hatching the 'Tyrant Right Arm.' Would you like to proceed with the stitching? To be honest, I don't have any special abilities, I just have a lot of brute strength.... Slowly but surely, Cheng Li realizes that this world has added an extra truth: 'With me, Cheng Li, there is heaven at the pinnacle of immortality and a world to be proud of
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The concept of the different powers hatching is unique, but the way they are presented feels disconnected from the main plot. It could be integrated better into the story.
The idea of having different body parts hatch and then be stitched together is a unique twist, but it's not clear how this adds to the plot or the character development. It would be helpful if the author could provide more context and explanation around this aspect of the story. Additionally, more attention should be given to building the world and establishing the rules of the universe in which the story takes place.
The concept of traveling through different worlds to seek external support is an interesting one, but the sudden appearance of stitched body parts and the crude language used in the dialogue detracts from the overall quality of the story. It would be better if the author could refine the plot and the characters' dialogue to make it more enjoyable to read
The character of Cheng Li seems interesting, but there isn't much insight into his personality or background yet. It would be great to see more depth to his character as the story progresses.
The character of Cheng Li seems interesting, but there isn't much insight into his personality or background yet. It would be great to see more depth to his character as the story progresses.