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Tobias Wong is a man with secrets.
He dreams of being a Battlesuit Designer.
He does not hate the government.
And his father is a supervillain.
Then one day, his absent father left him another. A secret so big and powerful, it would change his life forever.
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This is the unedited draft of the story. There is a published version of this novel on Amazon. Please leave a review on Amazon. I don’t mind if you give 1-star or 5-star, but it would help a ton. So please leave a review. Thanks!
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This is a very well written book, where not only does it have interesting characters but The world setting is quite new and refreshing from other stores that I've read so far. This by far has been one of my favorite stories on the site. Honestly can't wait to see what happens next in the story.
So i just started reading this yesterday, and i can boldly say it was worth it. The Character designs are really interesting, the world building is also okay, along with the story development. There are no insane amount of info dump concerning the world or histroy, but details are revealed as needed. So far for the update rate i can't say anything about it as i just binge-read the story, Translation quality i would say is passable. So GREAT.
Really love about design and mechanic. I really love about the beckground world, it give you much interesting story to develop from the detail in the becground. Overall "I love this novel". Nuff said
This has an excellent story-line. The main character is flawed, and is both aware of his flaws and accepting of them. The society in which he lives is well described and stable; the Laws, as well as the inter-personal relationships with characters around him. As for the author's writing, I have learned to accept the grammatical errors due to the probability the English is not their first language; my belief is that the author is dependent upon using translation software, either prior to or upon posting this novel on the website. Once I came to that conclusion, I found it much easier to read this excellent story. To the author: Thank you for your hard work and diligence. Please keep writing as you have a wondrously creative mind. On a side note; I'm a cyborg myself. Not to the degree your characters are, but I do have electronic devices implanted in my body, along my spine, to aid in controlling my movements while reducing pain levels from bodily damage. Have yourself a great day!
It is up again after a year and updating again. Quite a good read till chapter 45, the story is quite interesting, family background has a very big potential for development, he got 10+ year worth of undescribed history which may or may not be revealed. the mc is not a genius(without system) but a brute force passion type. The story pacing is surprisingly fast even with a lot of technical(fictional sci-fi) content. I hope authar keeps updating the novel.
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people tell me that I should reade since it seem like something I migh5 like so you never know let check this piece out .
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Tranlastion is absolutely undreadbly bad, it feels like a machine translation without any editing at all Like the translator has no familiairty with even basic english the word tenses are all over the place Im very forgiving when it comes to translations it doesnt have to be good translation only readable without giving me a headache from how bad it is There might be a good story under this translation but i will never find out because its unreadable
Bought this book on another platform when I couldn't stand to read the mech turd anymore so far it seems to be a better written mech novel