/ Fantasy / The Strongest Beast Tamer
概要
Devasted by an abrupt evolution that ushered in a new world. Humanity is faced with a difficult challenge of adapting and changing their ways and beliefs. Leaving your friends behind for strength or when in the face of danger is almost a natural decision now.
The discovery of beast taming is all that kept some of them alive and sane. However, how will this discovery change the behaviours of humankind?
Lachlan is a unique individual with a unique and mysterious background, he encounters many strange people and grows throughout his journey.
But at the end of the day, he has one mission; to gain knowledge and strength to survive and even reign at the top of the world. Making friends and foes along the way.
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The current release schedule is going to be:
7 Chapters every week
Should this novel get into the ranks I'll create more chapters per week. Also, there's little bonus chapters for a certain number of Power Stones.
Ranks:
Top 50 - 9 Chapters per week
Top 10 - 11 Chapters per week
Top 5 - 13 Chapters pew week
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レビューを書くObviously, have to be shameless and give my novel 5 stars. This novel is my take on stories such as Monster Pet Evolution, Pokemon and all those types of stories. I believe I have a good idea for the story and have plotted the first arc already (it'll only be 4 - 5 chapters). I'll easily be able to plot out the rest of the arcs, mainly cause I've had this idea for a while and have constantly improved and changed it I do hope you enjoy reading it and aren't to fuss about my English.
A good but unfortunately immature story. I don't mean that in that the themes are childish and there are problems with the world, what I mean is that it is literally undeveloped as a concept. Perhaps if I used to author's power level convention it would be better to describe it as 'adolescent'. The start of the story is honestly relatively good, starting with a prologue which starts out in a fairly unique direction, a system that fails to install. It shows up in the story proper but I found the choice to start the story that way was honestly refreshing. The first two volumes are fairly good, though they still show the problems that the story has with it pacing through out. It's both painfully slow and ridiculously fast. The story is trapped in a span of several days where very little happens and the world function ok, and then globally everything goes to hell. There is no ramp up or foreshadowing so it's pretty jarring. Unfortunately after volume 2 the MC becomes a 10 year old edge lord who solves everything with violence and people let him get away with it. Honestly even if you're the strongest person on the scene when you start running rampant on military bases and smacking soldiers around, they're going to find a way to sort you out. That said I think the writer should keep writing, I think they have some talent that if they work on developing would enable them to express a much more impressive story, there are already shadows of it showing up in this story. The advice I would recommend is counter to what I tell most authors: you need to go back and rewrite your story. This story begins with a solid and interesting concept, but a concept isn't a story. Your concept is 'what happens to make the story'. You refine that into a story premise, 'this is what happens in the story I want to share'. A clearer expression may be that your story concept is a single sentence, your premise includes that concept but expands it to a paragraph. After that work on pacing and world development, try to come up with a power scale that ramps up slowly. From the get go everyone the MC encounters are either high or perfect compatibility unless they have two different compatibles. And the main character is always presented as the strongest by a ridiculous margin. There are lots of things I think could be done better but I don't want to tell the author how to make his story so I'll end with this: The concept you created can become a better story than this, and I honestly believe you can write a better story then this at this point.
Very uninteresting so far.and i personally feel it doesnt even have much potential.so not gonna waste my time on this.too bad.i had high expectations when i read the title in the beginning.
This novel has an author that won’t write down details about his characters I mean he obviously can’t remember any of them one chapter mc is 6 then his 11 then his 9 from this order it’s mad fam his suppose to have a 3 year old sister she hasn’t once said a word in 23 chapters not once!! The world doesn’t make sense I mean he says world evolution and everything change but their able to get online?? And I think their charging their phones I mean it’s been 2 days I think and I’m pretty sure phones don’t run that long even with low battery so if they do have chargers they got electric right? But fcking again HOW!!?? Anyway you will get confused not from the writing just from these small things that keep up and finally you can’t take it anymore and drop this sht
ネタバレを明かすO início foi incrível com potencial para ser uma história digna do top 10, mas o autor se perdeu, a trama ficou sem sentido o mc passa de uma criança para um soldado sem real motivo, de forma irreal. Principalmente como o mc lida com a morte dos entes queridos, o pai morre e ele , e toda a família simplesmente não sente nada e o autor apenas da uma desculpa de s****** , depois toda a família morre e ele não sente nada nem raiva ou dor ou tristeza. Basicamente uma história com potencial enorme que fracassou, se por inexperiência do autor ou falta de planejamento mesmo. Autor se vc ler está review aqui vai um conselho, reescreva do momento que eles descobriram que o pai morreu a partir deste momento que começou a dar tudo errado.
ネタバレを明かすNice read, chapters relatively short but most of the time has actual content within it. Writing quality can use an improvement, but aside from the little mistakes here and there, it's quite good. The updates are stable most of the time, with unexpected IRL events that might make you delay a release which is completely understandable. Would love for you to release more, but can't ask for too much. The character designs can improve, possibly give them different personalities and make sure they always follow them. As for the world, it's good, I like the concept of the whole world getting an abrupt evolution. A bit nicer than the whole isekai thing.
This is a very good Beast Tamer LN. I highly suggest reading it. There are multiple different worlds in this LN. This is a nice world-evolution and beast taming novel. First 30 or so chapters are where the MC takes his family and gets them to where their dad is. They tame beasts along the way. After that the MC moves on with the main story plot. They find new land that wasn't there before the world-evolution. They go there to find new plants and food and to see what it is all about. I am trying to keep this vague so I don't spoil it. They find stuff it is quite good. They find and figure out ways to increase their stats without needing to increase the levels of their beasts. This is good because their beasts run into a bottle neck in leveling at level 10. To go beyond level 10 requires the best to evolve and they have to try to figure out how to do that. They do find out info about it and what they will need. This isn't something that takes them for ever to get info on. The beasts won't evolve over night since they have to find things to help them evolve and it is different for every beast/type and even the same type can evolve down different paths and the tamer can pick what evolution paths to have their beast evolve.
Thanks for the update and for the record I have been reading about the novel from the start to the new one and I hope for the best way possible that you could get the story to evolve and get the story to be more specific and excited
Hello All Still in chapter 30 and it has been decent so far, very refreshing concept with Aussie Land and how the Taming works. Would love to see author exploring more details like this in the future. Things a little rushed with less details than what most people would expect. The MC is immature (even though he is 15 with the internet today.....is kind of unusual to see lol) and introverted which does not help some of the development.....I mean so far he learned a lot about the apocalypse rules/ Evolution but only shared the minimal with his family......expect a little more family trust and hope to see this coming up soon as he matures......but is a work in progress and really looking. For the author and MC progress in the future. Lease keep up improving! I love the theme of taming beast without a Pockeball or godly OP skill!
I love how they wrote this story. It is as realistic as it can be and I like it. I also like how there's not too much drama on it. But the story needs improvement still.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon as you do
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell the next chapters come out so please write it soon so I’ll be able to read it.!.!.!.!.!.
Everyone who rated it below at least 4.5 is all stupid this story is amazing I have a great day and I will be a good time to get the same as the same thing I can do to get a new one and only one of my
I really like the idea and the Mc and the quality is pretty decent too but the story goes at a snails pace the last few chapters and there wasn’t any proper fighting since some time too. There are a few gaps in logic too but generally I just love the story and recommend it to anyone that likes fantasy/apocalyptic novels. Spoiler——————————— I am pretty excited about the academy and the elemental stones are so op but they don’t really use them correctly or they don’t use them at all for example the plant control stone wasn’t even mentioned since it’s first appearance and the gravity stone could turn anything into meat paste with just a thought.
So guys... i like this novel. The author spent his time to create it and we, as readers should apraciate his work.... so you guys should give it a try. Because everyone has its taste. English is my second language ;P Bye bye
I liked the book there should be more chapters but people have their own live so that makes it fair but still it would be great to have more chapters
If the author listened to their book, they would have gone mad from the amount of dashes, i recommend not listening to this but i do recommend a read. This book does have some bad grammar in places but it can be fixed easily by having a proof reader. Apart from that, it's a good book!
Yet again finding a good novel but the story it self a slow pace.. Mc still weak.. Naive.. Just a brat.. Yeah.. Its so realistic like a real life.. For translation novel, its ok for a slow pace.. I can just stock pile it.. But this is original novel right? Just how long if i do stock pile too? With average 1 chapter/day.. Sad.. Maybe this is the reason this novel not include on top 20 yet? I dunno..
ネタバレを明かすThe overpowered 9 years old kid was so cool even though he was still a kid it felt like he was a 30 year old guy in a kids body. The story was awesome and i liked how Lachlan had powers even before the evolution and how he was a half human breed, and how his father wasn't with them for him to see if whether the half breed he had was from his father.
作者 FlamingWolf0
TL;DR : start of story is good, but then it slowly degrared into garbage. Very inconsistent story. Beginning was very interesting: there was beast taming, cool abilities and some fighting. But then author has lost its way. Author gets sidetracked easily and he limits MC's potential by stupid plot. First 2 Volumes were okayish, but from Volume 3 its super bad! First half of Volume 3 you get boring physical training like push-ups (why he doesnt get stronger by killing beasts??!!!) and second half of Volume 3 (after chapter 62) main character turns into some justice fighter. You wont see any interesting beast fights, instead MC will infiltrate cities and try to save mistreated children, cook food for children, play with children, etc... Thats SUPER BORING!! There are many things that might annoy you: characters dont have any personality, they just act in a way thats convenient for plot. Story also wont avoid cliché where politicians act like no-brain idiots and/or bad guys. Some examples of limiting MC: Beast tamers have super OP way to get stronger (killing enemy will grant you 5% of its 2 strongest stats), but from Volume 3 main character almost stopped hunting monsters and instead he trains by doing physical training (push-ups, etc.) ... WTF?!! Main character also stopped using his 3 powerful beasts with masive lightning attacks and in majority of situations he only uses mediocre Griffin. WHY?! Its just so stupid.
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