The Starry Death Swordsman

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JiyuYami

As a filial author, I carry on the tradition of the author clan without shame. I put a five star in my own novel ! who dares to say something ?! say a word and the clan of shameless authors will chase you to the bottom of webnovel thanks for reading and supporting

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mysterios_origin_v

Very good start. I'm impatiently waiting for the rest

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SEP1A

This author has an artistic sixth sense - a vision that they seek to realize. I know that as the years tick by, they shall continue to rise and become an author of valor. I urge the writer to keep reading and growing. I wish to see Gu Xing's name pasted across all of web novel!

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calfikydra

Quite an intriguing start! But it's hard to give a whole headed review, when there's only four chapters so far. But the chapters i've read was really good! And i'm positive that the author has something amazing up his sleeve for us [img=recommend]

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Itsuki_Suzuki

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

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kuhaku_sora

I really love how you used those words with awesome effects in webnovel! Like, woah! That's a new feature I have seen in a novel! And the system or the abiltiies too really looks complex. It has this sort of descriptions that makes it more immersive and detailed for us readers. Kudos for the author!

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naitor

I started to read and I can't stop anymore

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BLOOPINGBLOOPER

!!!!very lovely story. it kept me hooked all through out the day and i really enjoyed the characters. they're so vibrant and cool. truly great story telling!!!

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Brandongould

This is Brandon Gould and I am responding to a Review Swap here is my review Firstly what i liked about the book is that the story from what i read was well paced and expect for some parts with i left some comments on, the story was written well enough to were it was did not impede my enjoyment. From what I have read there is one thing that was missing that would make this book with can be a very interesting story is that lack of detail explaining to the reader thing like where the story takes place, the envierment around you and other such details that make the story lack the depth that would allow you to become sucked into the writers world,

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AreeSensei

There is a lot to say about this book. A lot of problems too. The author knows how to write dialogues and created compelling characters, but descriptions are cruelly lacking. There is also a lot of repeated text, problems with verb tenses, etc. Some of these issues can be explained by English not being the author's first language. I would advise writing first in your native language and then translating since you'll have more vocabulary choices in your native language; and be more at ease with what you're trying to tell. However, the writing is somewhat lacking content. It's a bit too fast, and quickly overlooks any detail. It's too "light". There is also some 'parasitic text', like author's notes put with the story itself, and "this is picture of mom", etc. That can be solved pretty quickly though, by editing said chapters. I think the author needs to work on his general storytelling, be it the pacing, the depiction of the environment, or properly shifting points of view. Though, the author already writes good dialogues, so give it a chance, as well as some advices, to help the author improve!

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Lamelle

Great read. The story is amazing and the details can be easily understood. I have read cultivation novels before and I am positive this book is going to reach the top. I recommend it to anyone.

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Dara_Manuel

this right here is a gem... The writing style is creative, the world background is solid and captivating I like the setup and the characters.... I loved the way the baby has such a mature aura😅😅it's weird but lovely, maybe because I'm into cultivation but this book kept me wanting more.

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RoarWritings

The starting looks interesting and promising. But Xing being able to talk like a mature man from the birth even though he doesn't have any memory, It kinda feels weird to me. Nonetheless the story has potential. There are some grammatical and spelling mistakes. I hope writer will fix them and keep it in mind.

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cookiez_tiffe

A very good start and pace, hooking me in right away with the story. Author had managed to find sweet spot for the pace as it perfectly blends with the story. Not too fast nor too slow. I'm awaiting the next update. Cheers.

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A_lucid_Dreamer

You can tell the writer takes passion in his Characters and novel from the detail that isnt over bearing but just enough. The only Potential flaw i could see in the future is making Xing way to Powerful for any antagonist to fIght. but i love the system, keep coming with the chapter though author im loving it .

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Altair_star

The story is great. Love the concept. The worldbuilding, character design and writing quality is superb. Hope you update faster. I am hooked.

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Samantha_R_Samuel

I am absolutely glued to my screen! It is very interesting and everyone should give this book a try I am sure you won’t regret it! 👌💕💕💕💕💕💕

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thunderstorm314

very good novel

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rennishh

Im an upcoming author and this novel has really inspired me, keep on writing author. This is great honestly. Continue writing you are a great inspiration

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mrant12

Very very well written. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!