/ Anime & Comics / The Saiyan Emperor ( Reborn in Dragon ball)
概要
Dragon ball fan is Reincarnated as a Saiyan
So get this some random Jo is just enjoying his day and stuff then boom dead deadified and he meets this guy called soul guide who he asks reincarnate him to dragon ball and imagine the dudes luck when he is reborn as a Saiyan with great potential .
Just so you know I am just trying to make the best story I can and I would like you to give whatever constructive criticism you can so I can best improve and stuff .Also Mc might not be the smartest but ill try to not make him an idiot but hell have his moment he's only saiyan after all
Also I hope you enjoy the story bye
Disclaimer(2): I do not claim ownership of terms, characters, powers, and material in general besides my own. All rights reserved to their respective owners
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Writing quality - 3: Grammar is readable unlike some of the ones I've read from what I assume to be a chinese author, but the use of [ , . ! ? : ; 'monologue' "dialogue" ] is absolutely terrible. There is running sentences, an overuse of the word "and," as well as some incorrect words and typos being used. Stability of Updates - 4: Update frequency is pretty good. Story Development - 3: Despite the grammar, the story is a an entertaining read that I recommend, but there are a number of contradictions in the story that need to be fixed. Character Design - 3: Just okay but has some contradictions with descriptions compared to their age. World Background - 4: Well, it's Dragon Ball so an average rating of 3 + 1 because of some added background information of new worlds and buildings. If at least half of these issues are to be fixed, I'll likely update my review at a later date.
it's the best story ever I'm not just saying it because I'm a shameless Author and I want people to ready my story and stuff so enjoy the story
I forgit to write a review, and my god...his sh8t is golden! This kept me off of my boredom! Story is nice, the imagery used is quite good and descriptive.
"God gives me wishes" story. :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :...... :......
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Bro im just saying this kingdom building in dbz fan fiction is the best! Others just focus on brute force power and all that! But here it’s true conquest. I love this so much thanks author although u stop at mere 41 chap i’ll just use my imagination to finish this story. Cheers!
My attempt to balance the bad 5 star reviews.My attempt to balance the bad 5 star reviews.My attempt to balance the bad 5 star reviews.My attempt to balance the bad 5 star reviews.
I really liked your work, reading this story I remembered another DBZ fanfic where the mc is also an emperor, but the story is very different. The name of this fanfic is "Broly The Saiyan of Legend!" If you want to read it as a reference, it is complete. Author: Draugzel
So a pretty fun read im surprised i got trough it so fast hehehe anyway i really like the writting although there where parts where i felt wait a minute but other than that i liked it i also like the oc’s but i hope you Author wont shaft them to the side since i started to like two of them but that dosen’t seem likely also i love how Author is expanding dragon ball a bt more but i feel the author is trying to hard to bring in some element that dont belong in dragon ball but still i hope to see how this turns out
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cool but make it more realestic moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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I love the storyline but the only difference is it feels like he's not even going to update this story no longer
it was written for ppl who are really into power tripping.. 8th grade syndrome kind of story.. grammar is poor but not MTL level, so I'm guessing the authors English is a second or third language. there are hardly any good dbz stories so if u have nothing else i guess u can waste half an hour or so on this..
Author is very cringe. It’s disgusting. Writing is terrible and author needs to take another writing/English class. Trying to help balance 5 star reviews. Since most of them are authors burner accounts
"God gives me wishes" story. MC is probably cringe just like the author. ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ...... ......
Writing 3/5 (*tip* you need to add quotation marks "" to differentiate thoughts or speak out loud). Update 3/5 (you just have to see the time intervals of the chapters). Development 4/5 (seemed fine to me). Character 4/5 (okay). Background of the world 5/5 (I can only say something * dragon ball world everything can happen *). (Goggle translator)