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Chapter 2-19 is me having fun if you don’t like you could just skip to chapter 20
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I didn't understand its so confusing that you loss interest in it. but hey who am I to say . thank you for writing this novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap] .
it's kinda confusing at first but once you hit chapter 20ish i its start getting better and better ....... M
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Man I tried to make it through, I got past the Anime mess, but the entire thing is now just some regular c-list cultivation novel that pulls out every trope and cliche. The best talent, the best arts, the best resources, everyone and their mom wants to kill him because, plot. Its decent at best, but this shouldn't be in fan-fic, its more a novel.
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I like the way he didn’t give mc that easy life like how other do. Although he could improve its still not bad so keep going and don’t DROP!!
mc is a fucking retard and his learning is to slow and for christ sake u said that he remebers some of his past life memories to me he's just stupid cant read when mc acts like he knows nothing when he is a primordial fucking being.
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Hope you can continue to write more and don't drop this, thanks for your hard work, so keep up and write and update more, More chapters Don't drop Keep up
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the story feels a bit rushed. ........................................................................................................
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I agree with the other reviews but this dude just dropped decently written chps and has crossed a hundred ,,congrats...[content is kinda ****ty though], **: u care about this bk no?...why not take the review and re write?, keep the same old elements but take the reviews into consideration?, just saying ur **** would be interesting, I mean it is but its executed ****tily
sorry 2 chapter and drop it by the attitude of the mc ---------------------------------------------------------------------sorry 2 chapter and drop it by the attitude of the mc ---------------------------------------------------------------------
Just boring and confusing, I know what the author is trying to do, combining popular anime but it failed to keep you interested and reading. My biggest issue is the Main character his dull, boring, unlikable character; and author wants him to be overpowered? nah I'm out. If want a good story then at least try to make the MC likeable to some degree.