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The Moonlight Swordsman

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作者: Mahaksh

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Volume one has ended and the Tournament arc has begun. Do check it out you will not regret it.

Aizel has been depressed since he was a young man. From being tormented in school to being treated as an outcast solely because he is an antisocial person, the only things that kept him going were novels, manga, piano, and sword practice.

He never anticipated being transferred to another world while drunk by the side of a lake under the moon. The world with mana is filled with superpowers, magic, and monsters, and he is unsure whether he is dreaming or not.

Only to discover later that he possesses a power that may be called the most deadliest thing he could have ever imagined, but with limitations and drawbacks...

"All of the kingdoms, magic, and everything about Xelgar fascinate me. But what Alora said makes me very curious."

"I knew I could easily use sword skills, fire skills, and techniques because I had seen and read so many anime and novels. I still can't believe that there is now a unique power as well."

"Is it true that I possess the power of imagination, as Alora claims? Isn't that a little overpowering? However, I was still unable to use some techniques and skills in the fights. The power has a disadvantage and a limitation."

"Is that because of my cracked core? If I can somehow recover it, will I be able to do anything just by imagining?"




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    Hidden gem alert —————————————————————

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    youraveragebitch

    I had to leave this here. I just completed the first 100 chapters few days ago and am somewhere around 120. This story started out slow, but the quality of writing has improved so much in such short time! I got goosebumps reading one of the chapters. The story turns dark and I love it. It's definitely worth reading till at least Chapter 110. You won't regret it. I'm excited to see how the magical and political situations develop and looking forward to explore more of Xelgar. P.S. Alora best waifu

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    Mahaksh
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    To all the new readers who are reading, 95% of the story is in Xelgar. My story is big, so don't except insane character development in just under 50 chapters. Have Fun!!!

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    Yorbin
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    This is probably my first mostly positive review here. What I like most about this novel is that the author does away with most of the clichés of this kind of novel and the novel feels authentic. The common tropes you'd expect are just not there and the best thing is that there are none of the most common annoying tropes. The best thing so far is the story's development and what keeps me reading the novel. If I had to name its weakest point, that's the characters. I don't like most of them if I'm being honest. Aside from Daisy and the kids. That includes the main character, he is overly trusting even when he has all the hints that he should stop just trusting people for no reason. I sincerely hope that will improve in the future because an unlikable main character is a huge detriment. Although I did like some twists with the characters. Like one of them being surprisingly good while another one isn't. Anyway, if the main character sees some development, I think this novel has enormous potential.

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    Mahaksh
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    Hey guys, Finally, part 1 of volume 1 is over and I am really happy that you guys were here reading my story. I know I am not that much of a good writer and this is also my first book, but I am working hard and improving on a daily basis and improving my writing quality. I have a really good story to show you guys and with Part 2 of volume one you are gonna really love it. I am gonna attempt to pull something off really difficult thing in this part but it will be worth it. Please keep supporting me through comments, power stones and etc, I will make sure to make every single coin count spent on this book.💕🙌

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    Mahaksh
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    Hey everyone newbie author here, this is my first work ever , I am gonna be consistent everyday even if i know atleast 1 person is reading my chapter, it will make me happy and motivated to continue the work 😇 Follow the journey of Aizel , you will get goosebumps everytime i promise ❤🤣👹

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    CryptoCat

    No harem? Instant 5-stars!

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    yasin_uzun

    I read until 183. I don't like the current situation, everyone is dying, especially Leah's death, I was very upset, the author would prefer to reduce the deaths, I hope the children will not die in the future, the background is very good, I would like her to spend more time with Emma and the children

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    Rishabh_Choyal

    it's been a long time since i enjoyed reading novel! I hope it reaches top 10 ranking soon! All the best to the author

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    The_Broken_Author

    nice work really like the background story I'll be waiting for more updates so don't disappoint, so far the novel has been going well, I would like to see how it would turn out

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    UnsterblichPlebb

    Bruh no wonder hes's been bullied a lot cause he's an 'antisocial' person:contrary to the laws and customs of society; devoid of or antagonistic to sociable instincts or practices.

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    Pendulum_

    Resplendent, I have to say it's an excellent book originally I planned to drop a review after the first five chapters but then I was lost reading it until the eight. The book starts of slow but that's the joy of it because you get to observe from the eyes of the MC his everyday life. The description of each character was more than perfect and overall the storyline is broad and enviable.

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    Nie1i
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    i like the quality of the storytelling and the plot also good

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    DrZee
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    So many things just keep happening. Just as I’m about to relax, boom, something happens. I’m being kept on my toes

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    ADOLF_KITLER

    great novel keep it going and give me more chapters btw u should make a discord for the novel it is a great place for people to ask doubts about the novel

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    FransizSef

    Man i still didn't start reading this but aren't you changing the cover a lot

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    Glezeri
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    no world background, the writing quality is amateur, no grammar mistakes, it's just the delivery, not even gonna go into the mc cause I would be ranting for too long, at ch 23, things just happen, there's some mystery past with amnesia maybe there'll be a story, can't say if it'll be good

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    MrBoness

    The stars says it all! It only is a 5 out of 5, because I can't give a 10 out of 10! It has it all! A relatable MC, a charming unfolding, and man... I don't know what else to say, besides GIVE SOME MORE!!! 🤘🏼🤘🏼🤘🏼

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    HouseOfLee

    Now this is epic, reading through this I can see great writing quality, incredible plot and unique characters. Keep up the good work!

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    MonarchTheFirst

    Lovely story, I love the development of the story and the character design, Larisa has to be my favorite villain, I like how personality bending she was, if that is even a word.

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