Brian had downloaded an achievement tracker that promised to track his achievements in both game and real life. He just wished he had picked a different first game.
I really like this but I think the writing is kinda confusing, like put the story in each individual paragraph, put spaces in between each other, other than that I like it
I really like this but I think the writing is kinda confusing, like put the story in each individual paragraph, put spaces in between each other, other than that I like it