/ Horror / The Lowest Demon of Hell
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(Indefinite hiatus due to rewrite)
Awaken in hell as the shocking horror of the fall of Abel unfolds. Having lost his mortal life Abel reincarnates in hell, not as a human soul but as a rising demon!
Using the power of Hell's profane system, Abel will descend to depths he never reached as a man. Progress through the body horror of the demon world, one evolution at a time, while exploring the trauma of a life cut short.
Sometimes, there are things you should forget.
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Seems well written and updated daily. It's hard to find anything written with a non human mc so this is a real treat. Kind of addicted to the system format so this hits all the buttons.
Okay, so this is a man that knows how to write. When I clicked on this link in discord, I certainly wasn't expecting something this good. I mean it's the guy's first book, and he's doing an amazing job. I look forward to reading more of your novel in the future. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. There may be only one chapter right now, but I can tell this will be a hit. That's all, thank you for comment ng to my TED Talk. ~ Wolf out
I won't talk about what happens in this novel very much but what I will tell you is what I think about it after reading 15 chapters. This one of the greatest original novels that I have read which wasn't a translation, there are little to no grammar mistakes the descriptions of the characters are great. The world-building is currently inexistent as there are only 15 chapters but it looks like it will be great, the MC seems to be pretty logical and smart while he also has his own times where he is controlled by his demonic form instincts. There are currently 2 recurring characters that were born at the same time as him and they are in the same area, and the only thing I can say is that I'm looking forward to seeing further interactions between them. The system is decent and the notifications aren't spammed very often, at the same time you could say that they are only used at the good times, the chapter ending makes you crave for more chapters. I support this novel and its author and he will have my power stones from now, please consider reading the novel as up till now it was a great ride, hopefully the author will keep pumping out chapters of the same quality at the same rate he is doing now. What are you doing still reading this review? Read the damn novel :)
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This is amazing, I can't begin to find the words to describe this work but I have to say keep up the good work. The pacing is great as the world slowly unravel its self. Wordings and descriptions are on point as you get to immerse yourself in the character, scene or situation. Sigh, if only web novel would allow some background music that would play as you read...that'd be even better.
Extremely well written for a first time writer. Though it is a bit dark, if you like that sort of thing you'll definitely love this book. Great start, I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up author!
Very high potential but seems a little bit like Custom make demon king. Except better storyline and system but written worse. /////////////////////////////////
Right from the start, you can practically FEEL the world with how vivid the descriptions are. The premise is interesting. Horror isn't usually my thing, but I am absolutely loving this!
An absolute gem it is a story that has a similar beginning to custom made demon king but darker and more gory while still being awesome. Hope it is not dropped
First things first, the novels quality. If you enjoy system novels like chrysalis or solo levelling, you'll surely enjoy this novel. One of the authors strong sides is his vocubulary. That's a neat strong side when your story takes place inside of hell(spoiler alert, it does). The novel has darker theme, you won't get your "Reincarnated as a slime" feel from it.
The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
So ive read up to Chapter 10, and I have to say that this novel is quite good compared to many on this sight. It skip** over unneeded nonsense and jumps right into pure and unadulterated violence. So far the writing quality is great, and the plot is steady. Although its still to early to tell, and I would like to see more chapters before I can really decide how good this book will be, id say it had great potential. Great Job author <3
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The story is well written and very entertaining. Each chapter has a suspenseful ending, making one want to read more. The top writing quality allows one to immerse in the story, making it even more enjoyable. Definitely entertaining throughout. This novel is a very good read and you should definitely try it!!!!!
EASY 5 out of 5 great control of the story and an outstanding MC loving the pace, and consistency as well! Would personally like slightly longer chapters but that is only to the testament of how entertaining each chapter is!
This story is really well written. Good vocabulary, excellent grammar, and an exciting story. It is also written in first person which not many authors on this site use. Overall, the chances of this story being at the top are pretty high. I recommend those to read this if they love game-like stories.
A fellow author here! I definitely appreciate the author's ability to create vivid worlds with great descriptions. I believe I can learn a lot from this story's writing style and look forward to future chapters. I appreciate another author doing a story with a system because I enjoy seeing the progress through those system stats. I know I need to work a lot more on developing such a system for a story, but I am very interested to do so in the future. This story is perfect to learn how to use a system in a story. Keep up the great work, Mr. Author!
Great book! 11 chapters in and I'm already hooked. This book is hard to fault. The story development is very well-paced and understandable and the writing quality is fantastic. On top of that, the stability of updates seems to be very consistent at the moment. Keep up the good work Author. You've got my support!
Okay, I haven't finished the other chapters, but Bruh, It is amazing, I love the way you write, the details you give and everything. People that are reading the reviews to know if you should read it. I only have one thing to say "Read it if you like the type of weak-starting MC and becoming stronger, this book is amazing, I'm sure it will become one of the best in the future". Please don't ever stop writing this, Keep up the good work!!
WebnovelCreators101's Review Reading Status: Chapter 2, but it felt like I'd been reading a thousand chapters. The length is perfect. The author has perfect control. And the ending of each chapter... closes on just the right note which leaves me gnawing for more... Writing Quality, 5 Stars, I am lost for words. It is pitch perfect. I noticed one or two typos but it is entirely negligible. The storytelling-style is very favorable. Every time I read a paragraph, a word or two would jump in and surprise me in a glowingly positive way. It deeply Impresses me with every read. Stability of Updates, 5 Stars, after I read the first chapter I was worried if the next chapter would take a long time, and it turns out I was not to worry, because I woke up the very next day to find the second chapter waiting to be read, and I literally squealed. Continued...