/ Book&Literature / The Lord Peverell
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A story of reincarnation of an orphan boy of fifteen years who died due to cancer with only a vague idea of magic from watching Harry Potter movies once and reading one or two fanfictions being reborn as Harry Potter in an alternate universe to the Harry Potter universe.
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It's just so annoying that he somehow not just skips grades but gets a fecking degree before hogwarts...like come on! Also It's very hard to read since some chapters are pretty much just two paragraphs.. Overall not for me, seems waaaay too much like wish-fulfillment.
Leave aside the few drawbacks, this is a very relaxing read. A story for bedtime if you know what I mean. Keep up the good work author and wish you the best.
Great story and AU is great taking a new approach on the standard fanfics as Harry. The writing is a bit difficult and would be easier if broken up more which is improved a bit in later chapters. I am curious when the whole Peverell bit comes into play as so far there is nothing about it.
The changes to the story and the development of characters make this a very interesting and enjoyable read. I’m always scared to start reading a story that doesn’t have a lot of chapters, but i am glad I started this one and am looking forward to seeing where it goes. Please make it past the tri-wizard cup, so many good ones die before or during that point in the story.
Читать сложно, но можно справиться. Текст в основном в повествовательном формате, диалогов очень мало или вообще нету. История приличная, не скажу что она очень оригинальная, но видно что автор старается и выкладывается если не на все 100% то на 90% точно. Советую прочитать, даже не смотря на сложность чтения!
I love this story it is a great storyline and i like how it is written but you should start with the update again as i would love to reed the rest
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Good story, the development of the MC is a little on the cracky side, but is a good story nonetheless, I mean I'd be lying if I were to said that I didn't like the story, I did like it, however, I find the lack of periods and commas... Disturbing to say the least. I can proofread for you if you like.
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Ótimo em tudo, me senti muito feliz em ler tal fanfic. Espero continuação. Perdão, mas ainda estou aprendendo inglês para poder ler sem tradutor.
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It is lone of the best HP fanfic I have ever read. It is a masterpiece. Please don't drop this. If you drop this I will find you and torture you until you start this again. Just kidding by the way really love this.
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I can't read this at all. It's just a huge wall of text. The formatting is atrocious. paragraphs are rarely separated and even then it's hard since they seem to be separated randomly. If you can read like 3 paragraphs of infinite text enjoy, if not I recommend skipping or in case author plans to edit waiting