/ Book&Literature / The Lightning Dragon In Harry Potter
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A young man named Luke found himself in a peculiar situation, transported to a world far removed from his own. Surprisingly, an unexpected invitation landed in his hands, beckoning him to Hogwarts, the renowned school of witchcraft and wizardry. Unbeknownst to him, his life was on the brink of a profound transformation.
Accompanied by a unique and otherworldly traveling companion, a frog with the uncanny ability to traverse the multiverse and procure one-of-a-kind treasures, Luke's odyssey into the realm of magic was just commencing. However, the cascade of surprises did not conclude with his acceptance into the institution.
As he unveiled the enigmatic package delivered by his amphibious companion, he stumbled upon a remarkable artifact known as the "Thunder Dragon Slayer Crystal." This enchanted gem possessed unimaginable power, capable of subduing the most tempestuous storms and harnessing the very lightning coursing through the skies.
The astonishments persisted as Luke's frog presented an array of astounding treasures, including the mysterious "Eternal Mangekyo Sharinggan," a relic cloaked in legend, believed to bestow its bearer with unparalleled insight into the secrets of the universe.
Yet, the most remarkable revelation of all unfolded when Luke's frog introduced an unexpected guest to the hallowed halls of Hogwarts – none other than the renowned "Erza from Fairy Tail."
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I want to ask about a novel for those who know it? It's about someone reincarnated as a brother to Harry Potter. And he must not change canon.
great for a start. I hope you won't get hung up on Hermione. a little more description of magic and its interaction with the outside world (well, my quibbles). waiting for an update
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The story is very good, there were some errors, but nothing that hinders the understanding of the story, I think it would be interesting if he gave some gifts from the frog to improve Hermione's strength, I hope she doesn't get left out of the story after they stay together, it would also be interesting to put some of her points of view
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Alright, here's my review after reading the first 26 chapters. Writing quality is okay. There are some weird spelling mistakes at first, but it gets better a few chapters in. Those fanfic's gimmick is that the MC has a golden finger which brings him OP power ups from other literary worlds. There are a few plotholes, but the author usually ends up justifying them a few chapters later, so it's not that bad in retrospect. Now, the only real problem with this story are the characters. They have little to no personality. Hermione, for instance, is the worst offender. She's reduced from a brilliant witch with her own personality and ideals to literal arm candy for the MC. All she does is react to what he does. As for the MC, all he does is act cool with the powers he got for free and flirt with Hermione. He's also instantly good at whatever he tries to do. All in all, your classic wish fulfillment fanfic. I'd give it a 4 if the characters actually had some personality.