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It is a story of a Princess who has a tremendous dark force inside her that can be controlled by others. What would she do if she found out the truth about her past?
Let's see what will be her decisions.
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For someone who just wrote her first novel, the story and plot that revolves around the FMC is well written. I have no fault with the grammars as it doesn't really matter to these kinds of story where you can just ignore it as the story is good. Hope you keep it up and don't lose your enthusiasm in writing.
The plot and twists are very well written I am having very fun when I am reading this novel please keep up the good work and keep improving I am waiting for the 5 th chapter 😁
I like the progress it has with every chapter written. Good luck with writing, and with a bit of spell check, everything will be perfect. Congratulations again and I wait for more ☺️❤️
I didn't read a novel yet it is my first time But it's best of those coz the story was awesome and the characters are good enough 🤠 Keep going more and congratulations 🙂
The plot is well written and the story flow is good too. Other than some small grammar mistakes to notice, it's a good story for a first time writing. Waiting to see how the story unfolds between the master and the student...
Nice beginning! Although it's your first time writing a novel, the story is well written... Poor the little princess who can't do anything like she wants just because she's a woman 🥹🥹 Good luck for the next chapters which will be released quickly right?? 😜😜
The beginning of the story is great 👍🏼👍🏼 here and there still need a little bit improvement but it’s your first novel. So, still good one 🙂 Keep it up, bestie!! ✌🏼✌🏼Good Luck!! 🤗🤗
Hm its a good story but it certainly has potential to become great or even become one of the top novels in my list. I really like the charaters most of them are well written but, some of them could be improved. Still considering this is your first work its good. Will be waiting for more. Peace🐢
I like how the story goes, wish to have lots of chapters uploaded hoping to make it longer. This is quite a chapter to wait. [img=recommend]
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