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Fanfic about someone getting reincarnated into DxD world with the laziest system ever, sign up system!
This is not serious fanfic. I write this for fun and self-indulgence.
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Mc cringe, naive, pathetic, fool, fool, dumb, stupid. this novel got nothing to entertain no more. I mean as you read more chapters, he barely make progress, he can kill or seal orochi but not even leave a scratch on susanoo. I mean at least put some damage on susanoo but nah, also he's telling yasaka about the system and his reincarnation, pretty stupid move honestly. irl If you did, you dead even it's supernatural, why because even the god want to know the secret of reincarnation to reincarnated a person for his/her slave, army etc
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I tried reading it past 10th chapter because author didn't throw his MC to Kuoh right out of the bat.... but it's getting worse and worse with every chapter. Not to mention how bad grammar is, something autocorrect would fix easily, or how the story just doesn't want to make any sense.
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This is pretty bad, the second hand embarrassment is too much, the cringe is sin, the mc isn't lazy he is just ret*rded, the grammar just keeps getting worst with each chapter.
author everthing will fall into place for you but not now it will slowy come to and considering the story dont study useless bad revives all you need to do stay focus, set your goal, and reach your goal and everything will be find but it will take time and be rough at the beginning but later on it will be fine
It’s good but I don’t like it there isn’t enough information giving to stuff such as will he start turning into a dragon there’s other stuff at best I would rate this novel a 4 but since there isn’t really any information other then he’s weak witch he shouldn’t be since wind dragon slayer magic has the easiest dragon slayer magic that can harness dragon force also dragons in fairytail are all above the heveanly dragon stage or on it since igneel was able to destroy mountains like it was nothing with a claw of his finger a kingdom would be destoryed they could have destroyed the world but didn’t Albion and draigg struggle to do these feats
its quite clear that the writer is amateur and write his MC based on wish fulfillment. like normal human being, the MC kind and samaritan to everyone else to a fault. its like good man giving money to beggar but instead of money he giving out power. very naive like high school boy. well he is still better human than issei ig. also the author dont know proper english of some indonesian terms like 'dukun' which is untranslated indonesian language. in case anyone wondering, dukun in english is shaman or witch doctor. anyway overall the fic is mid. not good but not awful either. it's boring tho
It was good for a while. It was interesting, but it read like Chinese Cultivation novle. he keeps getting stronger and stronger, which is cool. But he doesn't do anything even after he finishes his evolution. He doesn't really do anything, just more lists of things he's doing and going to do. And, the whole dimension thing messed me up. He was supposed to be opening the underworld to a dimension that was gonna house his faction. He had a base in the Underworld. And then he had a pocket dimension. and dimension he was gonna go into for his faction from the Underworld. In the pocket dimension he was creating had a world all in itself filled with origin seed energy. Then he was gonna use a gate to the Earth from the dimension He created for his faction. It just sounds all f****** convoluted. It's too much. Basically, the cool factor wore off of him getting stronger. He didn't do anything with hid strength. So while it was cool, there was nothing other than a cool factor once the cool factor wore off it was boring. The novel became boring.
The novel has potential, let's hope the story won't be ruined by the author. I will give 5 stars for now. .........................................................................
All I can say is that the author has taken a different approach in this one .so give it a read you won't be disappointed
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its quite clear that the writer is amateur and write his MC based on wish fulfillment. like normal human being, the MC kind and samaritan to everyone else to a fault. its like good man giving money to beggar but instead of money he giving out power. very naive like high school boy. well he is still better human than issei ig. also the author dont know proper english of some indonesian terms like 'dukun' which is untranslated indonesian language. in case anyone wondering, dukun in english is shaman or witch doctor. anyway overall the fic is mid. not good but not awful either. it's boring tho
Don't bother if you can't get past the grammar mistakes and vocabulary shortage because it's not worth it otherwise. It's a good idea like any other, but executed badly.
I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.