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The Imbecile Lord Is Married to Five Beautiful Goddess
4.31 (75 レビュー結果)
Nomination Award for WSA 2022 Contest
概要
In his first life, losing the one he loved the most, grief overshadowed his life until death knocked on his door.
He thought that he would finally be free from the nightmare but his life was far from over.
He was reborn again.
In the second life, he was reborn as the youngest prince of the strongest empire and was born with a silver spoon.
He was married to five Beautiful goddesses.
His first wife was The Empress of the neighbouring kingdom.
His second wife was the Saintess of the Church.
His third wife was the daughter of the wealthiest merchant group.
His fourth wife is the Goddess of War on the battlefield.
His fifth wife was an assassin known as the Shadow queen who had been raised as his caretaker.
But who he was, he was just an imbecile, an idiot, a disgusting fat pig who was ostracised by society and spat upon.
Unable to tolerate him, The Emperor cut him off from his family tree and stripped his title of Prince and banished him to a small vassal state for the rest of his life.
The Vassal state which was in shatter and had been usurped by the noble and was on verge of destruction.
But that was until one day lightning struck him and pulled by the mysterious strings of fate, his soul ended up in The Sanctum of Goddess.
And from there, his myth begins.........
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Hello to all the readers who decided to stop by and gave my book a look. I am thankful for all the support and blessings of the reader who decided to spend time on my book. With this review, I wanted to point out some things. 1. As you saw in the title, it will be a harem and the mc will have five wives I will assure you that there will be no more addition. It will begin with five and end with five wives. 2. Some readers may find that interaction is quite less between mc and his wives and some feel that it had been late since mc wives are introduced. So, I wanted to tell you that Mc wives will be introduced one by one slowly. It was done so that Mc can grow up and before meeting his wives, he can at least have some achievements and strength. I don't want to write a story where mc runs after chasing girls where girls run after mc thinking he is so cool and wonderful and every hundred chapters another female lead is introduced which is making the story with harem quite bad. So, even if you dislike harem, I ask you to give you a try and judge with your own eyes how different the story is from other typical harem. 3.By the time, I write this review it hadn't been 6 months since I stated as an author.Reader may find some grammatical mistakes. Since I am not a native English person and I write on an old smartphone which hangs a lot while typing so I ask you to pardon me on that. But I will assure you that the story would be readable unlike my first books whose beginning grammar was quite bad.Even mtl trash grammar is better than my other book beginning. That's for all know and I hope you like it and support my WSA work.
This is for you author, since one can have a good discussion with you without getting heated up even if one attacks your book, so i decided to make a more in depth review and while many points still stand I removed the points where I out of my own preferences was a little unfair. Writing Quality: 3/5 It's MTL, so don't expect anything amazing. Especially in the earlier chapters, there are many issues like wrong pronouns, wrong sentence structures or swapped roles in a sentence and so on. But I have seen a lot worse and it is enjoyable if you like the story itself. I think just by going through the older chapters and looking at the comments where a helpful reader already wrote the correct version and then correct it, would make it a 4/5 for new readers. Stability of Updates: 4/5 Not much to say. Coming from royalroad 14 chapters a week is inconceivable and impressive. I always imagine that the quality suffers, so I don't like this way very much and would like to see quality over quantity like on royalroad. But I know that people on this site probably see it differently. Story Development: 3/5 The problem I have with the story is that I like to see the way the MC has to go in order to become strong or even the strongest, but instead it was only said that he had a training arc with the goddesses, but it was skipped and instead he slowly unlocks the abilities he learned from them through the system. So the reader just sees a list of (yet locked/lvl 0) active and passive skills the MC gets at the beginning of the story and that makes them seem less special and deserved (even if they are). Another thing I dislike is that the story skips around too much, so there is not enough time for proper kingdom/world building, character development, forming of relationships and so on. This makes everything seem less deep and lack substance. But I think the plot itself has potential. It just needs refining. Character Design 3/5 Like I said, everything lacks substance and so do the characters and the relationship they have with the MC. I have only seen the first three wives and I can already tell that they are very cliche and the others sound to be the same. The same goes for the MC, since he is just like MC in most novels. Person with sad past gets reincarnated and becomes powerful, so he can now beat up the bad guys. And this brings up another point of criticism. Sad pasts. It has become the standard in newer novels and I don't like to see it in every book, especially if every important character gets one. MC has one and both wives he met up until now have one as well, so I would prefer if its not the same for the other wives as well. But I like that he can be ruthless if he has a reason. World Background 3/5 The quality and the amount we get is comparable to other web novels on this site and I feel like, as always, it is lacking and I would love to see more detailed worlds like in normal fantasy books, but that's just my preference and maybe people like to read more simple books on this site. I think the best thing the author can do for this book and the next is to slow down with releases, instead of two a day, maybe just write one and instead read proof, take your time to write and rewrite until you got some good quality chapters, instead of just throwing out chapters for the sake of it. Maybe check out different translators and grammar checks and go with the best you can find. I think you can do a lot better if you just take your time and you end up with a shorter/slower released but nice quality book. Instead of being a good author, try to be a very good one. I think you can do it.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
I really love this novel. I really like that you don't rush the meetings and I look forward to how you introduce the other female leads. I do hope you don't make it so other characters that like his wives makes too much drama out of it. I hope you put them in their place and don't drag it out. Here I might be a selfish (I mean I am), but I would love more frequent updates even tho it's already great 😅 Other things I like is the MC's personality, his interactions and thinking. The world background is great for now. I'm excited to see how it unfolds. I can say the same with the story. I also will say that I don't feel any problem with the writing, if there is any mistakes they will not destory the reading flow and the understanding. Just a thing that I wish will happen: MC to be a good leader, and rely on other in their field of pratice. I don't want him to be for example good at economy when he got his merchant wife that can do a better job. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This was my first long review and I wish you all the luck and love you can get from writing this novel! Will add comments to this review whenever I feel like I have something on my heart. 🥰
The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.
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Oh a story about five wives how interesting! Wait what do you mean it takes awhile for him to meet up with all five? What do you mean there's a pointless academy arc that takes him immediately away from said wives. When you've been taught by literal Goddesses searching for knowledge at a regular school is unbelievably tasking to read.
I honestly liked this novel a lot, however, there are many things that discourage me, the mc being placed as someone with no talent and with average potential discouraged me a lot, to the point of stopping reading several times, because there were many other more flashy novels to read, I was also quite dismayed at the way the dialogues between 3 or more characters were written, I felt a lack of emotion, when one character spoke to another, with the exception of the mc no one reacts until the end of the line, ex: The MC made a statement totally out of character for your character's speech to someone, the 3rd person wouldn't react until the mc spoke to them, as if waiting for the moment for their scene to react (of course, there were exceptions at some important moments), when the world really It doesn't work like that, if I am someone who has never killed and I speak in front of my wife I would massacre thousands of people, she would certainly scream at me at the same time, cry, or at least be at that moment, I am not I would wait for her moment of scene or the end of the conversation to react, the same with a friend, acquaintance, even my subordinate would react in some way surprised. That could be me being too perfectionist, or personal taste, but that's my humble opinion of romance.
The story skips around too much, like one week will just go by and everything that we wanted to see is just gone. I feel like the author needs to take more time to establish the relationships and develop the world.The way interactions happen seem off and lack substance. I'm not sure how to explain it. The book has potential but i think it just needs to be slower. maybe adding in some chapters that are purely character development early on would do a great deal to the overall story. It is worth a read, but don't expect anything amazing.
The story has promise but flow of story is inconsistent. Like at the end of one chapter MC laughs like madman for show about to begin and start of next chapter somehow week has already passed and story starts from random location. Second problem is basic english. Not being a native speaker isn't a reason. This kind of English you learn in 5th or 6th standard(local school). I am also an Indian and non native speaker. I tried correcting basic things in paragraph comments but I just gave up after chap 55. One solution I suggest is if Ink stone allows you to copy paste content atleast write it in MS word and do basic spell and grammer check then paste it later. 2nd solution is obviously take 20-30 mins to learn everyday, trust me it'll help you. I did it you can do it too bro.
initial 150 chapters seem like a bad ripoff from release that witch manga. Some initial mysteries does gets answered after 150 chaps, and some other mysteries answers are not looking nearby even after 300 chaps. I don't even like the background story of mc. He was just a average guy, then how was he able to withstand the whole lot of torture (training) from goddesses. He didn't had any motivation to live (before mc's soul was pulled in void by goddess). So then why did he trained even after so much totture, without going insane?? Just bcz of motherly love from queen goddess.. Honestly, mc lacks character development. other characters also remain same throughout 300 chaps.
I have read till like 81st chapter and I would say that this novel is amazing and people who love genres like system, fantasy, harem, or funny charecters then this is a must read. I gonna give a 5⭐ to this one cause it deserves it. And I'd totally recommend it to anyone, and I wanna advice you that atleast read about 30-40 chapters and then decide if you wanna continue or not.
Of all your works, this book had the most collection. But why does it have to be neglected/totally abandoned?Some of us are still waiting for updates though, and I even donate power stones some days.Hoping You will resume updating and keep it coming, please, Author.
nice..........................................but author, will you ever update the novel 'The Extra's Survival' new chapters choro bhai plz bahot log padhna chahte hai 🥺🥺
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I've read all the free chapters, but I'll stop there. It's an ok story, but I have a hard time reading it due to the rather poor writing. Quite a few grammatical errors, the sentence building is problematic and the text doesn't flow and/or come together (for me at least). I have to say that the quality of writing increases a bit as the story goes on, but not enough for me to spend money on it. The story itself might be worth a read, if you can stand the writing.
NOTE TO AUTHOR ON SYNOPSIS: I came from your last novel wondering why there were no updates. I haven't read this yet but as with the last novel I corrected your synopsis. You only used the draft version of my corrections in the previous novel and never saw the final copy which was a shame but it doesn't matter, I made this correction the final draft for this. Few things to be noted. It sounds really strange that you don't identify the MCs name, it makes it awkward, especially the first sentence, it's normal to transition to "he" after a name has been introduced but without a name, it's a bit strange. It's like introducing abbreviations and acronyms, you don't introduce a concept like RAID to those who wouldn't know what it is. Instead you would say Redundant Array of Independent Disks (RAID) and continue along with RAID. Similar concept. Only the first "his" really needs to be changed. Again, I haven't read this yet so it should be: "In Billy's first life", "In Joes' first life" and then you can naturally transition to he/him, etc But this is just my opinion, you don't need to use any of it, obviously \\\\\\\\\\\SYNOPSIS BELOW\\\\\\\\\\\\ In his first life, losing the one he loved most, he fell into depression, as grief overshadowed his life and death knocked on his door. He thought that he would finally be free from the nightmare but his life was far from over. He was reborn again. In his second life, he was reborn as the youngest prince of the strongest empire and born with a silver spoon. He was married to five beautiful goddesses. His first wife was the Empress of the neighboring kingdom. His second wife was the Saintess of the Church. His third wife was the daughter of the wealthiest merchant group. His fourth wife is the Goddess of War on the battlefield. His fifth wife was an assassin known as the Shadow Queen, who had been raised as his caretaker. But who was he? He was just an imbecile, an idiot, a disgusting fat pig who was ostracized and spat upon by society. Unable to tolerate his son, the Emperor cut him off from his family tree, stripping his title as Prince and banished him to a small vassal state for the rest of his life. The Vassal State which was in disarray and had been usurped by the nobles was on verge of destruction. Until one day lightning struck him, and pulled by the mysterious strings of fate, his soul ended up in The Sanctum of Goddess. And from there, his myth begins...
I rarely leave reviews and am more of just a avid lurker, but I truly love this story. There are minor grammar mistakes but nothing griping. Maybe one criticism I have is as the 5 wives in the title is what grabbed my attention to this book but as the current chapters I have read he has very short interactions and conversations with them.
I like this. I hope the characters, mostly the girls gain depth. The story's premise is wonderful, having the mc magically tied to the girls. makes it so he will have to grow, no Mc relationship plot armour. Writing is good with room for improvement.
Writing quality isnt the best. A lot of words need to be added in some sentences, and removed in others. If the author could get a editor or go back and edit his chapter, i would probably enjoy it much more. Story development is good, but the author never specifies how much time passes, until somewhere around chapter 100 i believe. Ive read to chapter 217 and dont plan on continuing it until the grammar and spelling gets better. I do understand that english is not the authors main language, which is fine, its much better than any MTL you would find, but i do hope the author goes back and fixes those mistakes soon
It is not an exaggeration to say that this story is very promising. I'm very sure that if the author are able to give this novel justice, it will be one of the most sought after novel in this app. May you continue to write this epic tale, and I look forward to seeing its completion.