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https://www.webnovel.com/book/the-hunter-that-returned-from-hell_19497501605475605
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レビューを書くa cliche novel with a not so clever MC and one dimensional villains............i was expecting more.......so disappointing......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
why cant i send gift.?.theres no button?...… ,..😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 good job writing this.
dont drop please,,.......................................................... good story,.........................
ネタバレを明かすFirst of all, Five stars because this book deserves it. It would be an injustice if I rate it lower.. this book is interesting..caught me hooked from the first chapter.. The MC's cheat is his 400 year's spend in hell, the author had written so well..except for some few fixes, this book is great. keep going author
they skipped immediately 400 years, and for someone who lived so long the guy couldn't even control his emotions, this novel is terrible. And the writing is as good as my little sister who is in 2nd grade, though i believe shes better
Overall the story is good similar to the novel i read called three meals a day reincarnator something.. i forgot correct name, but still the story is good.
The premise of this story intrigued me and I thought to give it a try... But getting past the 1st chapter proved impossible! I'm really sorry to say it that frank; but the writing is *so* bad. Cluttered phrases, repetitions, very simplistic vocabulary and a ton of errors; no useful breaks to make it less... Obtrusive and a grammar that hurts at times. Descriptions are simplistic if there at all; Dialoge reads more like a bad play written in high school... Seeing the 4.5 stars rating - does it improve in the later chapters (like, vastly)? Then I'll just struggle through, but if it continues in the current quality...☠️R.I.P. So, help anyone?
The concept is very interesting. The writing style leaves a lot to the imagination and interpretation of the reader. The pacing is ok with a few weird tangents in the plot. But overall what surprised me the most was the direction the story took in the beginning. Having a great concept perfect for a power fantasy. Then quickly switched the direction to one that is more aligned to that of a revenge fantasy. I am interested to see more, if only just to know where this is going.
Good Story Keep going have a nice day { *-* } Stay Safe >?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?>?
La historia es bastante buena y es un poco parecida a "seol station necromancer" y "solo leveling", pero ya luego se va separando su propia trama espero ver como progresa ya que tiene pocos caps en este momento pero va bueno
So good gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
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Overall this is a dang good book not perfect but maybe even great the main character is as of right now not understood I’m not entirely sure what kind of person he is and even when we learn things about him we are told it rather than shown it most of the other characters are just props for him to act and react too of course that isn’t to say it’s not a fun book it’s reminiscent of only I level up but is definitely unique in its own way the only thing that I would actually complain about is how he mutters this one young master guy who was frankly really foolish and it just felt lazy overall there is some really fun stuff you could do with this concept but it needs to be fleshed out more if anything I would try and get more conversation with the character and to give him a more complex motive than protect his family and blind revenge. Also give this story at least one power stone it deserves more recognition.
作者 Rish_madara
This novel is amazing.