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A boy who has been bed sick since he was born finally reached the end of his life. Fortunately the gods decided to give him another chance and allowed him to be born into a new world. The only problem was that, he was not human!
"I was only joking when i said that all I needed was a healthy body and that i didn't even need to be human OK? You didn't have to take it seriously!!" The frustrated scream of a little manta reverberated in the dark underwater world.
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this is my brief analysis of the story so far(chapter 16),may contain minor spoilers, Story - 5/5 Not a genius idea but it do it very well,reminds me an anime from past year Honzuki no genkokujou,one of the few isekai animes that are worth watching, has a simple idea but fulfills its purpose in the gorgeousness of its simplicity Stability of updates - 5/5 Dumb thing to exists,take your time to do a great story World building/background - 4.5/5 One of the most important aspect on a isekai is your world building and The only problem is because for a ocean you can do a lot of a things with it,the ocean has divisions,depending on which ocean you are(pacific,atlantic...) the vegetation and species of animals change,you can give a lot of details for describe the environment,it doesn't have to be credible but there are a lot of things to explore in the ocean,but despite that, the work gives you a very good feeling that the characters are in the ocean and that’s what matters. Characters - 5/5 For me, the most important element of a story(so I'm going to write more here).I usually think that a story has good characters if you can imagine knowing them in real life or, if not, there is some deep reason behind it,and this work suceeds. The crab has an explanation in its acts in chapters after its presentation,and the thing that really stands out is the MC,a person with an obsession with knowing how a healthy life works,seeing he discovering new things and the new world and exploring it is simply splendid,the most immersive thing I’ve ever seen in a story until is a character knowing new things,like a manga called Oyasumi Punnpun,a manga that has some of the deepest characters ever created, this manga has its highest points when the protagonist is getting to know the things of life,i felt at some times reading this like I felt reading Punpun,I hope this work reaches the level that was Punpun. Enjoyment - 5/5 The most important thing when you reading something,this is a very fluid story just go read and enjoy. Fluid like a wave on ocean.(haha)
Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. Please update more. The story so far is amazing.
Hello! I was told to give as honest of a review as possible so here goes! Firstly, I’d like to say that the Hollow God was a fun and entertaining read, alive with action and an enigmatic and intriguing world. There’s always more to discover and a fight to be had. The descriptions are vivid and do their job well in feeding the reader’s imagination. The story is rife with action, and well-described battle scenes to keep you on edge. If you like cultivation novels with a fun and interesting spin, this could be the title for you. With that being said there are a few things I’d like to bring up to the author. The quality of the first two chapters strands a strong contrast against the rest. While I applaud the author for improving the quality of his craft, I don’t think it’s a good thing to keep the introduction to the story subpar, as it’s extremely important in hooking the reader. Writing mistakes seem throughout are the most prevalent in these two chapters and I highly advise the author to go back and revise them. Another thing about the first chapter, I’m a little unconvinced with the first person narration used here. The majority of the book is written in the third person and the shifts in perspective can be jarring. But beyond that, the first paragraph introduces a character who is detached both emotionally and physically from his environment and first-person narration excels at diving into the mind of the character. If this character is emotionally closed off due to his circumstances then he becomes difficult to emphasize with and you lose the advantage of using first-person narration. Not to mention, the character’s personality takes a rather drastic shift after this chapter so I don’t see how it’s necessary to write in the first person. With that being said, the characterization drastically improves after the first aforementioned chapters and is definitely something the reader can look forward to when reading this book. The writing style, as mentioned before, is vivid and captivating. It’s fun to read and entices the imagination. However, the author often makes small mistakes(like frequently forgetting to capitalize) or using cheap gimmicks(such as employing asterisks for action) in his writing. I would really appreciate it if the author went back to try and correct more of these errors, as they are rather frequent (of course, I totally understand the occasional typo here and there but these small, obvious mistakes are extremely frequent). The author also has the habit of info-dumping with large, intimidating paragraphs. I highly suggest to break these up in one way or another, as they can be both daunting to the reader and also boring. On top of these long info-dump paragraphs, they also often featured confusing run-on sentences as well. Please break up your sentences! And/or add commas to make them more legible. Luckily the author doesn’t do this extremely often but it does come up occasionally in the story. As for the plot…I’m not really sure what the plot is. The general direction of the story feels extremely vague in the first few chapters. There’s a lack of conflict or overarching goals. It’s just fighting, powering up, exploring, rinse and repeat. I wish there was more of a plot direction from the very beginning of the novel that would have lured me farther into the story. With that being said, the world is still fantastical and for many, this is enough of a good reason to pick up a book and turn to the next page. The characters are also cute and well-written so that’s something to enjoy as well. Kudos to the author and I wish him good luck with his writing!
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Unique concept really interesting start to a story you could say a breath of fresh air. Excited to find out what happens in the future of the characters development. Good stuff keep it up!
one of the best "isekai" webnovel so far. Quite a unique concept and i love it. Just sad the author isn´t doing this full time, but beggars can´t be choosers . Anyway 10/10 story and humor. can´t wait how it will go on.
I feel as if the development of the characters are a bit fast, not even 10 chapters in the main character left home. This is fine, but I feel little connection to the main character. There was a big time skip almost right in the beginning where the main character goes on a killing spree with a crab. Then, he gets revenge on the person who wiped out his family with little effort expended. Where is the ******* building? This has potential for a big climactic battle where we can see the MC get revenge for his family, and it felt like anything but. In addition, i feel the relationships between the characters could also benefit from developing more slowly. The first part where he met with the crab and failed to kill it was neat, but then they do a 180 and as the manta is fleeing suddenly he befriends it. Then he begins to casually talk with the crab about things he has seen from earth with the crab not even caring much. the concept is interesting and refreshing, having a underwater theme can be amazing as well. But I feel as if this is underutilized, as there are little aspects of this used, and what is used is kinda odd. An example of this would be the MC and the crab seeing a giant tree underwater. First off, does it look like a normal tree? Is it a large coral reef in the shape of a tree? Is it a species exclusive to this world? In short general description of the scenery would be great. The world could be developed more, as we have seen the MC be able to talk with other species, like a eel, and a crab, and a fish, so was he able to talk to fish that he went on a killing spree with? Did he just want to go on a killing spree with a crab? In regards to the grammar and spelling errors, it's minimal or not very noticeable in my opinion beyond a few here and there. I've certainly read books with far more than this one. In conclusion, I think this could be a great novel, with it's interesting concept, but at the moment it feels underutilized, and far too fast paced to develop connections with the characters within. I will keep reading and I'll reply to this or change my review if my opinion changes.
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The mc is rather stupid and withing a few chapters he becomes a mount for a stuck up crab that sounds like a look princess that's pretty much the plot from there on mc obeys crab and acts like her horse and crab acts like she's a queen
Like it so far, just hope no turning human permanently.👌👌🙌🙌👍👍👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍✍️✍️🤟🙏🙏🙏🙏✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Hmm... I don’t know if the author is going to see this or not but I have to say that this is one of my favorite webnovel so far the characters you introduce as well as the everything else in this story has really landed well and I can see how much imagination you put into it and the humor is top notch so if you do see this I hope you plan on continuing this series but other than that this is a great piece of literature.
Best Of The Best I Dont Know What To Say ❤ Pls Complete We Need More Chapters I Will Recommend It For Every One Thanks For The Work Author 👍
*sigh* Another great story lost to time... I realy hoped that you would continue this story at some point but it seems that it has been abandoned. While it was being updated i loved the characters and thier interactions with each other. The world building was done wonderfully and the description of both the characters and the world was incredible.
Неплохо, хотя не хватает эволюции, или системы, чтобы было развитие интересным, но мне понравилась концепция водного мира, так как, таких произведений немного, кстати читать в оригинале прикольнее, чем в переводе, впрочем, все круто. Привет из России. Автор, хорошо постарался.
I love this story and hope the author doesn't stop. I've read for hundreds of hours (maybe thousands) now, but this has become one of my favorite novels in such a short amount of time. I love the characters and the world building. I really hope the author doesn't stop working on this novel
This is so far the most interesting book I've read so far pls keep writing like this I earnestly enjoy it thanks for the entertainment.
Oh God, I should say I really enjoy in reading this. I feel I'm in the book and everything is happen.. I can feel them. The writer make the design of novel very well I can feel I'm in his place and everything is happen for me... Thank you writer, you done well👍👍
Read until latest chapters am quite satisfied with this one Like the new non human mc and the unique turn of events give me a good unpredictable feeling and I like the way you get the world building process nothing feels too rush to give all the details about the world where the mc currently it,then for the characters It's really hilarious 😂 for me the interactions something make me laugh and emotional and for the story development there more chapters to come am sure the dear author will surprise me with laughter and bits of drama keep up the good plot author san Overall it's a good start. . . . Also my English is just my second language.
This novel has serious potential from all that I've read mc should be making a religion soon enough and have a tsundare crab goddess as a wife maybe after they grow stronger they can have a human form I would like to think that mc has a domain in knowledge and darkness and little god to have a domain in sand and light hope more chaps
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My mom told me my stories are always the best and though i was suspicious that she only said that because i was her son, who am i to question my mother?