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"It can't be." a group of ninjas said as a coffin was kicked opened
"That, Seth! Why him out of all people." a man with a large nose said as he took a step backward.
"it seems like I'm came back to life. But who got the ball to try and control me." a red-haired man said as he walked out of the coffin.
"Onoki, you have grown," he said as he began feeling out his body.
"Run! this war is over. We lost." The man called Onoki yelled as he flew away.
This is a story about a man who reincarnates in a world full of ninja as he went on to be the most feared man ever.
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the author here This story is a masterpiece, the best thing you will find in this story is the grammar, it is so terrib... I mean, so amazing you wouldn't believe it. It's like a good took a pen and started writing on a phone. Yes, that how horra... I mean, incredible it is. Try it out, you will not be disappointed.
This story is retarded. Instead of 7 Elements he can already manipulate 9 up to the point I read. In the chapter he realises he can manipulate multiple elements he says he can manipulate 7. But mentioned 8, apparently the mc or the author can't count. He realised he is an anime World when hen meets the kyubi. Ninjas, Chakra, Uchias, Senjus and his Sharingan where no hint for him. The grammar is terrible.
I dont know why this FF got high score. Mc is reincarnated person but so stupid. Being ninja without the basic of ninja, not knowing of shunsin,clone, and even worst,really bad at hiding. The only power of mc is to control element,in which he only use fire for decades because he dont want to try the other element. And the most important, the grammar or the sentence are killing so many of reader's braincell because of the typo and wrong grammar. English is not my main language and i can tolerate if its still readable. But this is killing my brain cell more than ever.
Very bad writing quality. bad explinations. Stupids story telling, and I understand About 40% of what he has written about.
Well, it's a good fanfiction for me if you turn off your brain and let yourself become Patrick Star... Don't ever think when you read this because you will get angry... Bad grammar, bad math because author can't count, author have a weird sense of age be ause apparently 40 is very, very old that everyone is shock that someone can live until 40,the plot is like washing machine, once it start the clothes inside is mixed together, author undecided with literally everything.. And lots more which I wouldn't comment anymore..
though story probably is good the way it is described and the writing quality ruins it all. Plus it is too fast paced for me, it is like reading summary of a story rather than story itself.
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I don't know if the writer is retarded who would you name their son Seth when they are Japanese.... And writer plz don't just use popular characters name and not implement a good personality, it's like calling a buzzer a smartphone.... and plz improve the grammar..
Interesting !! Can't wait for a mass release. 😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😏😌😌😌..............**********************************************
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The story is incomprehensible, the main character is foolish, the way the characters are written makes you think that they are unable to think for themselves. The MC's abilities are illogical, as the reason for his possession of those abilities has not been explained according to the laws of the Naruto universe and there are more errors, but I will be satisfied with this
As much as I love Naruto, I'm too much of a grammar freak to continue, and capitalization's are my sensitive areas. I couldn't get past a a few sentences.. Much love to the author though, I hope this fanfic gets a proper editor, and blow up. No hate 🤟🤟
Полный никак не связанный между собой бред автор похоже обкурился когда решил это написать( Весь текс полный бред взятый из поврежденного мозга автора.
horrible story, protagonist looks like a 3 year old child talking, just a little Madara bitch, looks like a gay romance, appears randomly characters, weak retarded protagonist, actor must be 13 years old
hmm well if yall read the author's opinion on his story then know that he is quite honest about his grammar. it's not so bad in the beginning but it somehow gets so much worse later on, which is a shame considering the character settings, the ideas of the story itself are top notch. if you wanna know how good it is, well, the sypnosis already told you, OP main, a little bit of that badass here and there, and sometimes there are comedies as well. to sum it up, ignore the grammar, work your brain a bit to make sense out of the novel and all its confusing grammar, and you'll find yourself a hidden gem :)))
maybe this the last review, the story before going to avengers world was great,the characters the story development the characters improvement,is all great and I can feel a personality of the OC, but it all end when the OC go to next world the characters become a kinda Bisexuals and even forgot the origin of his purpose in first universe, the MC just more hunger power and meet and attack other characters and the worst maybe because the fanfic fail to show its power to the reader, the writer decided to end this fanfic , hope the author will make another fics but didn't make a mistake like this one
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now I'm not one to make reviews normally but I'm actually really enjoying the story I mean there's some mistakes here and there but that's not really big deal I seen worse but I would definitely give this a try I mean you ain't hurting Nothing by f****** reading a few chapters and I bet if you read a few of them you'll keep reading until you read all the chapters that are already posted
One of the unique ff out there about naruto. why unique you ask? read it to find out. You may ask why not 5 stars? well my friends let me tell you. I and most of the people can neglect the bad grammar to enjoy the story(except nazis). But the problem is that some of reasoning and transaction is too flawed. I know some of you will drop the novel then and there but i say just read on. I promise you Won't be disappointed. And finally Author san keep up the good work. Stay safe and keep writing. peace out 🤐