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作者: godslove

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It's about a guy that got transmigrated into another world, the memories of his past life were sealed for some time. He grew his skills (sword art) slowly with the help of his father who trains him whenever he is available, he later got choosen by an ancient dual blades. Before getting a system that not only unlocked his memories but also his potential.


The novel also consist of different species and creatures such as vampires, werewolves, light elves, dark elves, hybrids, human, nether creatures, demons and magical beasts, e.t.c.

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Satisfied_Borlah_G

This is an awesome novel, im so addicted to it, its like the author used a charm spell on me. Once i start reading i find myself glued to it, well great job, keep it up. And pls make the chapters more frequent. [img=update]

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godslove

this is my first novel, Pls you guys should support me, comment and tell me where I am meant to improve in my writting, criticism is welcomed. I will try to improve more on my updating stability Pls bare with me, as for those who gave the Nobel power stones I'm grateful Pls continue supporting me .

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Satisfied_Borlah_G

Nice, this is extraordinarily interesting, lol I don't really know what to say Just keep it up and try to make the updates frequent Yeah least i forget, i just wanna ask Is the Main character not too up for a weakling?

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Bright_Ovie_3545

Good work keep it up. The story is well described and told. With that, it was splendid, I can say that the author has potential to do more and even put more effort to this. The plot is also steadily building up and I am hooked on every bit of it. I the writing quality is also lit!. Kudos for the Kobe well done. I am anticipating more😊

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Daoist2YYpqz

I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work. i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.

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Zenithnovels

Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

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godslove

i know I'm still lagging behind on the updates, I'll keep trying to improve

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