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The Extra Wants Control

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作者: Kas73_

4.21 (30 レビュー結果)

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Our protagonist, once a homeless child navigating the city's harsh realities, clawed his way towards a better life. He stole coins to buy knowledge. However, the prestigious university scholarship he craved was a rigged system, awarded to a politician's son who needed the name, not the education.

Descends into a life of crime.After being forced to taint his pride his death is ordered with his own making the final blow.

god "congratulations you're given a chance at a new life..."

him " why?"

god "cause you had a tough life so im being generous... and making you reincarnate in a mana world..."

him " bullshit..."

On the brink of oblivion, a dubious offer arrives – a second chance from a strange god. Haunted by the shadows of past 'generosity', Rei struggles with suspicion. Accepting means becoming a pawn, rejecting means eternal damnation. With no good options, Rei plays along, unaware his role thrusts him into a cosmic conflict.

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    covestar

    The plot is good, however, stop trying to be fancy with words and speak direct and proper English. Every sentence seems so fancy and it seems like author tries to be poetic but it fails because it comes out as bland. It’s fine to use figure of speech, fancy words, indirect words.. but when the writing is the same throughout, it just seems bland and boring. Infact I struggle to finish a chapter cuz it just sounds the same. Switch up the POV more often and stop with the poetry, it’s a novel not a poem. I admire the effort though. Good Job

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    billal_mohamed

    Amazing start.. Wish for more chapters 👍

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    relife
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    The main character is not likeable. And the writing put me off. Not really easy to read.

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    Aziz_Yaakoubi

    The background of the world that the author came with is interesting and not overused in other novels, though it is still very simple. The life of MC before reincarnation was kinda too much, like not even realisitic, it gives forced vibes too much, dunno if it's on purpose for plot or not. so yeah it can be said to be an amazing start, however it became absolutely bad and uninteresting at chapter 15-16 when the two half souls: Rei(old) and Raven(young) fused together. the author said it would be slow fusing but no, he literally forced it with the plot to create a new personality with the old memories, conclusion : no hope for character development and healing of Rei's mentality. stopped reading at that.

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    Muhamby
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    I hate every single novel that start with the mc given a second chance by “God” because “insert a lazy reason here”.

    9mth
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    FernandoRubio

    Por donde empezar,el transcurso de la historia es obra de arte como te presenta al MC, la perspectiva del porqué tiene esa actitud es excelente no puedo decir nada negativo ya que no soy muy bueno en ver puntos malos aparte de la traducción pero en esta historia es excelente,personaje despiadado,inteligente,con una pista de villano.🤌🤌🤌

    11mth
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    Jose_6501

    It really has great potential. I hope you continue updating. And also please describe more and more. And also some chapters are very short just hope you make them a bit longer. Overall it's a great read hop you don't drop the novel.

    11mth
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    DaoistxjmnAv

    keep on updating [img=update][img=update]

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    _ZEPHYR_2

    Giving review from 2nd id😅 . Keep updating . 😌

    9mth
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    _ZEPHYR_

    The novel is good mc is smart, calculative and manipulator and strong too side character are also good eg :- Lara and Axl Hoping u don't drop it mostly authors drops when they don't get good response so just keep updating it will become one of the best novel ❤ . (highly recommended:- 9/10) cutting kne marks because No FL till now no romance..

    9mth
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    MR_UKNOWN2

    Good one, Nice characters and startContinue updating 😁

    11mth
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    wrongaccounttt

    Nothing can stop me from adding a story that has the tag 'No Harem', absolutely nothing💅, anyway, the story is off to a great start, I hope it keeps it up.

    8mth
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    Tom_ato

    Awesome writing gets you hooked with the finer details of world building...

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    Diaoist12

    I like this novel a lot so far, would love some illustrations of important characters. Would also love a chapter about how naveah was able to gather all the subordinates he has. Overall still room for improvement like all things but this novel is definitely my cup of tea for sure. Thank you author for the stable updates as well.

    10mth
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    Handsome_Guy

    Alright. I've read until where the chapters are free. We start off with Raven, a kid presumbably a nobel who got thrown aside also presumbably by his family. Our MC Rei got reincarnated with some twist of turns and betrayals in his previous life. From that onwards, it is his story of how he gets stronger and get enrolled in this acadamy. It is not your normal story where guy without prior combat and magic nowledge goes and beats prodigies in the novel. It is a quick breather to see him actually get a master or...mother if you know you know.... It had logic behind it. I'm actually expecting the author to go ballistic with this one(I meant it in a good way). Too bad I'm broke so I can't read this novel. Will I recommed it to others? Yes! People who are expecting Non harem can hop on into this since author mentioned this fact in the synopsis.

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    DaoistFVc63y

    I got to chapter 135 on my computer, the truth seems to me that the Mc should be stronger, being trained by the vampire queen and the human queen shouldn't be stronger?

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    DaoistFVc63y

    What happened for what? You didn't upload any more chapters

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    Tiago_Maia_1922

    its been a while but why no more updates??

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    RAMINATOR

    The grammar in this novel is so bad it makes me go into fits of rage. Improper tense used for words and other words will be added randomly that make the sentence not make sense. Sometimes words will be missing and those words are needed to make the sentence complete. But if you can get past that then it is an interesting novel.

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