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In the end he died. This is the story of a man who had watched the end of everything and then was offered the future of a new beginning
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Warning this is my first time writing and publishing anything publicly so don't expect me to write a new bible.
Also I don't have an artist to help me so there will likely not be any visuals for a while
Finally please just enjoy
Cover is mine. Its Asataros's Helm
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Now look here lads I wont shamelessly say I am gonna hand you a new harry potter but understand that I will make sure that this is at least worth a good four stars
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Good read. Steady plot and character development. Understandable and there are hardly any grammatical errors. All in all, author is a good writer!
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This is written ok, but my biggest problem is the Mc. He’s supposed to be some kind of immortal that was forced to fight for thousands of years, you’d expect his personality to reflect that. but it isn’t, for some reason the mc is somekind of jokestar. The novel started seriously, but 5 chapters later the Mc has turned into someone that makes jokes all the time for no reason at all. The somewhat serious tone of the novel degenerated into another happy-go harem novel. Disappointing
Hi there, the story is quite good and I loved the synopsis. The imaginary is awesome and keep on writing. I hope the author continues the story!
good story, good plot, dont drop cause its an actual good story compared to the cringe novels being made recently. .........