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Могу сказать, что начало интригующее. Очень хочется увидеть продолжение данного произведения. Надеюсь гг будет этаким антагонистом или хотя бы не будет в команде Мугивар.
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I like it author, pleasee keep update... ................................................................... Thank you so much ...................................................................
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Its very good. The character seems very intresting, and the style is close to the original itself. The humor is good and how u potray each character is very good. The grammar itself are not that great, but the flow is somewhat ok. Good writing skills, and very creative.