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The Demon Monarch System

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作者: Syphiinz

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Apollo Kaiser, a boy who bore the unlucky fate of being unable to grow strong, was condemned by his family.

Discarded by his mother and abused by others, Apollo gives in to his rage.

However, this action results in his death. Many would believe it to be the end, but Apollo's death was a required catalyst.

The Demon Monarch System finds its heir and attaches to his soul, bringing him to a new world where he starts his journey to supremacy.

This difficult journey rife with conflict, conquest, and brutality shall serve as Apollo's temperance.

Watch as the heir of the Demon Monarch rises above all, conquers Sin, subjugates unthinkable enemies, and even brings about the destruction of worlds!

The rise of the next Demon Monarch begins...

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    DeathWalker

    I dont normally make a review for the novels i read because im one of the many silent fans. But this time im leaving one. It is amazing continue doing what you are doing and know that many are happy with the stories that you have created. And if tou havent given this book or his original book a try i highly recommend it. You are a very gifted author continue doing great work.

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    Syphiinz

    A little sum about this novel now that it has over 400 chapters. Despite having more than 430 chapters, this book isn't even 1/4 done. Therefore, it'll be a long one boys and girls! Now, the book is as the synopsis describes a story about a unique human who embarks on his journey as a demon while also learning of his circumstances. There will be countless battles, cruelty, gore, ruthlessness, a tinge of comedic relief, and romance that hasn't quite been decided yet. The story starts off sort of slow, but after Chapter 16 it takes off and the MC begins his journey into becoming a full-fledged demon. BUT! The story is being edited, so some of the techniques and explanations present in the first 80 chapters aren't present up to ~360. But this is being remedied quickly through swift daily editing. For those who continue to support, I appreciate you all. And for those who read, I appreciate you as well. Au revoir!

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    Bg93
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    Honestly this novel is really good so don't stop I think you can keep improving appolo the cultivation system is very well done for all that is weapons, take the ones you like so far the story is perfect but i just hope there won't be a harem Please no harem!

    3yr
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    Klemantoni

    Cons: -70% of the characters are stupid villains and the rest of them are stupid (including MC). -Some things just don't come together for me. -The start is bad. Pros: -The story gets better with time. -It's a great 'From Weak To Strong' story.

    3yr
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    Dragimlin

    So sad to see such a good story get abandoned. The frequency that this happens on here is frustrating. I think the story and characters were well developed until it stopped being updated.

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    Muhammed_Njie

    This is an amazing story and I love how you write it and the story development. I also like the back story's of the main character [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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    slaktarfisken

    I'm here again to write a second review, mainly because the one I wrote a while ago has aged tremendously in a short time. Though I have not gone back and re-read previous chapters, the author has gone over and beyond fixing the criticism I previously presented. Though there still are some phrases and wording that I notice as frequent and repetitious, it might as well only be because I have already seen them once before. The story is still satisfyingly fast-paced, but the writing previously felt a little too hasted has vastly matured into engaging and well-thought prose. Kudos to the author, and I hope to be in for a long, exhilarating story!

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    KarmaKalo

    I started reading this with low expectations and was thoroughly impressed. The backstory works and I like the fact that he actually left and gained strength rather than sit and take the favoritism and abuse from people. I would have preferred him staying away from the family until he was stronger than the elders but the reunion revenge does work for me. It was cleverly done and fun to see how he turned the tables on everyone.

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    hamzah672

    The Novel is great so far unlike other novels thAt have the title demon And a mian character who is a human Who is a hypocrite this Novel the mc turns into a Demon

    3yr
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    bob_billy_5354

    I have a thing for system-type novels, and this is the best one I have read so far. this for the character limit this for the character limit this for the character limit

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    Cristine_Wian

    is the author dead? why is he not updating any more chapters? he was supposed to be back on 1 sep but he removed from the synopsis. just where are you?

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    DaoistjgSy04

    Hey Author hope all is well, I miss the story hope to see you writing again soon I can’t wait to see how Apollos adventures end

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    Omezy
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    Alright so here I am writing a review it's been like a year since my last one😂😂. But to get to the point I can say with a hundred% certainty that if you like this genre of books this is one of the best ones. I'm saying that from experience it has good characters, the update rate is stable. Character growth that you can see over time just all in all a great book with an author that looks at comments and reviews and uses the criticisms of his work to make it better. check it out some time you'll like it👍🏾

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    zachery_chase

    Your writing is really good, and you can tell how much thought you place into your writing. However, in my opinion that is hurting your character devolpment and world understanding. I have read many cultivation novels and try to Understand the details of how they cultivate. You have made his cultivation eo complicted that I do not really understand hOw his strength grows or what he is supposed to be doing to get stonger. Ever since He has been figuring it out on his own it is like a ignorant child who is confusing and doesn’t know what he is doing. I am Starting to dislike the story because it is got too much going on with Unclear explanations. You have a good theme, character, and setting you have just overcomlicated it and are making hard to read. Sorry i am trying to be constructive in this comment and hope you acctually read it and get what I mean by it because at this rate I do not know if I will continue to read. P.S. I think most of my confusion comes from you have two different cultivation systems. 1 being the MC’s and 2 being everyone else. this is nice idea but I think Without the archaic demon to act as a omniscient teacher everything has blended and is not working.

    3yr
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    kyonio

    Overall I've quite enjoyed this book, I rarely give reviews but this just made me wanna write one. I love our mc's cold-blooded personality!

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    Dripp
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    Pls continue this.. this is the most underrated novel i’ve ever read. It’s way better than the novels ahead in ranking like seriously. pls dont drop. this novel is such a masterpiece

    3yr
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    Matthew_Gooche

    So many people breaking ground with their first ever reviews, these people even lack originality when writing comments. I feel like it surely can't be genuine, which is besides the point. More pertinently why would anyone care that it is a first. Going with a conservative 1-stat, can't expect much, but perhaps I could be wrong.

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    Aaron_Brooks_9528

    Are you dropping? Or are you going to update?

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    North670

    I actually enjoyed reading this story once I got finished reading the chapters about him being a kid. Grammar is also excellent considering most novels on this site have the grammatical skills of 12-year-olds. The only thing I dislike about this novel is how he got rid of his 'shackles' (weak body) when he broke through only to have a larger 'shackle' (sealing of ira stigmata). I know in the future its probably gonna be a huge power boost but I prefer a rather straightforward power up rather than waiting like 80 more chapters just to see its full potential.

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    3yr
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    idkus
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    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING AGAIN I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!! this is just for the letter limit this is just for the letter limit this is just for the letter limit

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