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概要
It is the year 2022, and some important leaders of the world have decided to create artificial islands because the population has started to multiply so fast for some reason and also, people have started to move there to have peaceful lives and no crimes, but some criminals have started to move there to create problems because they need the money and the police their arent as efficient as the ones on America or Europe. And on this series, you will see the story of two characters who will face these criminals and fight against them.
Warning:
This series is a parody of the real world and do not intend to make fun of the people from other countries, Gen Z, Gold Diggers. Karens, Yakuzas, Mexicans, Americans, Dogs, Cats, Woman, Man, Homosexuals,
First Arc:
A guy called Alex comes in Ruby City, a place where everything is almost possible, even for a guy like Alex who gave up on studying and came here to work for his cousin, who owns a restaurant called ”Luigi's Pizzeria ”. What he doesn't know about this place, will shock him. He thought this place will be nice and no big rate of violence and criminal activity, but he was so damn wrong on this one.
Second Arc:
A cannabis farmer comes into the countryside of Ruby City to sell his goods for a few years. But one day, when autumn has come, Ramirez had to sell all his goods for some reason and the only reliable person who can help is Gary Smith, also known as his best friend.
Note:
This story is also available on RoyalRoad
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Why did I never see this book until now? This is a greeeaaaaat book, and I hope someday to be as talented as this author. This is definitely staying on in my library, and I will keep on reading it during my leisure and dropping comments. I'm impressed by it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
A unique story but the concept is clean and straight and I like books like that. Though there are very few chapters , the story so far is interesting gripping my attention! Hoping for more chapters soon!!!!!
An awesome novel. Completely underrated. Writing quality and update stability are very good. Author also has good control over the book's story development and world background. Give it a try.
I think this novel has something interesting... its been a long time since I read a novel with multiple leading characters and it's very good written. Expectant about future development !
What can I say.... I had a good time with your novel ;) Something completely different from the novels on that app. Interesting plot and characters. I really like Alex. I am waiting for more.
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I will start from the beginning :) The cover page is original and catchy (different from what we usually see here)! The title... in general I don't like most of the titles on Webnovel, but I know that the app prevents you from adding titles that already exist, etc. so can be problematic to find it title, that will relevant to the content. Yours is GREAT! The few chapters I read are interesting, the storyline, characters, description of the background, etc... everything is in right place. You're doing great!
I like this story, even though it is just a short story this one got some chances to become a novel, but sometimes you have to respect the author's decision to make this creation a short story. My favorite character is Alex Rodriguez and even though I am not a Hispanic, I think his development started to become something great but I think he will one day snap and start to murder everybody to gain success. Also, the guy named Minoru is a big piece of shit!
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I have read a few chapters and what can I say. This story it probably one of the best out of here, even though I read only one. This story gave me some Grand Theft Auto, Mafia, Saints Row and God-Father vibes. Can't wait for your next work, Author!
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
This has to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read on webnovel. Pure comedy gold. Some of the grammar could perhaps do with a bit of a touch up, but it all adds to the unique charm and style. Even just the most routine things the protagonist does becomes hilarious. Like when he leaves a restaurant after eating a sandwich and gets felt up by a hobo who is checking if he just ate his own balls. Or when he comes across a *** party and is disgusted because all the participants are fat and unsexy people. Or even at the very start when he moves to a new city and passes through an area where only gangsters and prostitutes live. Sorry, my review can't quite do justice to lunacy you will experience if you read this! Give it a go for a good laugh!
HI LOVELY AUTHORRR! Firstly, I can't help but mention it's easier on the readers eyes if the paragraphs are smaller. Secondly, the different dialects of the characters have been maintained wonderfully oof! Lasty, it was never a cup of my tea, (this genre) however i find myself intrigued to stay on track with this amazingly scripted piece. The time i have in my hands doesnt do justice as i reallly wanna read more hehe. WELL DONE
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Lol, I like how the author put in a disclaimer that he will make fun of dogs and cats. You can tell the humour is good from that alone, not to mention 'Luigi's Pizzaria'. Pfft. Imagine, a guy walks up to a mafiaso and shouts, "It's a me! Luigi!" Then jumps on his head and kills him. But here he doesn't eat the magic mushrooms (drugs) and prevents others from eating them. Great concept, great writing. Keep it up.