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FIRST WORLD - Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou
SECOND WORLD – Everyone else is a returnee
A young man dies after avenging his parents. But an unknown woman offers him a deal to save the childhood friend who mysteriously disappeared.
Will he able to survive in a world full of monsters? More so when decides to kill the very God that rules the world, or will he lose himself in his desires?
See the World of Tortus from the eyes of Leo Evans, a Former Assassin as he slowly finds his own origins were nothing like he thought.
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This is my first time writing any Fanfiction. So please go easy on me.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything in this story except the OC and it is purely a fiction based on Arifureta Shokugyou de Sekai Saikyou.
I also don't own the cover.
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I love how the story started. The mc is cool but neither edgy nor a Saint. I'm also a fan of Arifureta. So. Yeah. Finally I participed a little in the initial creation. So I know the author will do a very good job. If he doesn't I will spank him😂😂.
Very disappointing. Was expecting a ruthless MC, looking towards their goal and being smart about it. No unnecessary emotions or interactions. Just straight to the point. MC here is copied out of the anime but made worse, as shown by his unrealistic interactions with others. His unusual trust towards strangers and his lack of emotional control make his background and character inconsistent with each other, contributing to the frustrating experience that this story provides. The sentient system doesn’t help either, as their dialogues continue to show lack of the maturity which is expected from someone who has experienced the extreme levels pain and torture such as him. Not only that, the fact that he chooses to sacrifice himself protecting the people he has known for only a few days clearly illustrates either his extreme naivety or the author’s poor choice of plot points, both of which should not be present in a story such as this. In conclusion, this novel is not for those who dislike unrealistic revenge stories or immature naive protagonists. Anyone who has moved past mainstream anime should probably stay away, as this story will bring you major frustration.
Shameless Author here xD Writing quality - I'd say, it's not the best because I have seen way worse writing styles. I'm still trying my hardest to learn new things Stability of updates - I have always published 7 chapter every week, so you can't complain. Story development - The plot is somewhat slow as I always try to do my best for character development. Character design - Hm, I can't decide it and leave it up for the readers. World background - The original really lacked world building and I'm doing my best to improve that perspective in this fan fiction.
To be honest this is a nice novel which gives some warm feelings while not having to get lost so its fun but its not very interesting to read a whole chapter of just flirting of the mc and the girls so plz fix dat
Loved it author-sama...Keep up the good work.. ... . .....140.......140......140.......140.......140........140........140.........140.....
This is a fanfic that is really worth your time. It's got everything that you would want from this type of story. If you start and think that this is just a copy of the original plot, then you haven't read far enough. Admittedly it does take time, but you will be happy that you stayed around for when it does as it's an amazing story. (🍋 included 😁)
A nice and refreshing story. Mc is likable in most cases. Some moderate overshadowing is also there. While not a masterpiece, but it is a very enjoying experience. I would like for mc to take girls from different works into earth and make an organisation.
This story is quite well written in the sense of grammar and vocabulary used, A large issue I have with this story is, however, the fact that it is too alike with the original. Whether it is Cain or Hajime, the plotline evolves in the same way. Sure, while the fights and minor interactions are undoubtedly unique, major interactions such as the Behemoth fight, meeting Orcus and training the Haulias are the same. I would've liked it more if the author decided something like not training the Haulias and would eventually come to regret some of his decisions.
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I give this book a 5 star review because I think it is the right thing to do and you cant stop meh.
The first half of the story isn't that much different than the original source material in terms of plot progression. With the MC instead of Nagumo falling into the dungeon, but unlike Nagumo, the MC has the gamer system to ensure he isn't completely dead weight. Anything after is where the real differences start to crop up, with how characters behave differently or how an apostle showed up early.
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I don’t know if it was just me but I’m the earlier chapters I thought it was kinda boring and sticking to canon like glue, but once it got started for real this story instantly became one of the ones I look forward to the most. If you’re just starting off, don’t leave too early or you’ll be missing out
the story get's more and more interesting and he loves all his harem members and he gets more powerfull and the girls try to do the same so they won't hold him back and he won't do the impossimble or do somthing he can't and make empty promises
Es mejor incluso que el original, ya que no le da tantas vueltas a los problemas y a sus relaciones. Además, el MC es más vivo y no se anda con pendejadas; si una chica lo ama él la trata bien y una vez que desarrolla sentimientos por ella la toma y en cuanto a su poder, tiene más ventajas.
Okay so I have to say this, I know very little of the source material. So I do not know how much of this is a departure from the original. What attracted me to the main character was his drive for revenge, and what that lead to. When he came to the new world, seeing how he adapted to it was nice to see. Unlike other isekai protags, he was already morally black. Which combined well with the mentality to survive at any cost necessary for his goals. Other than that there is a lot to read, and the character interaction is solid. TLDR: Cannot go wrong with this, solids overall
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Its really a good fanfic novel. Characters love it. World background love it. Story development loooooovvvvvvvvveeeeee iiiiiiiiitttttttt. Its awsome. Hope write more novel....
Pretty enjoyable so far looking forward to seeing how it pans out and what other worlds get explored. Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew Pew pew
Not much to say really. I'm a fan of Arifureta. And I'm definitely enjoying this fanfic. The novel starts out in an interesting way, then it sticks to cannon to till the dungeon, once it reaches that point, it starts diverting and taking it's own route to originality. But best part about this is that the author introduced a number of OC, and even introduced other elements and ideas that were outside the plot, probably as preparation for multiverse travels.