/ Fantasy / The Commandment of Chaos
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Abandoned as a baby, a child with nothing in this world embarks on the cruel reality of mana.
Where strong rule, and weak obey.
His life changes when at the awakening ceremony where he awakened something beyond the concept of this world.
A mana tool which people awakened at the age of 15 for achieving their dreams, while others mana tools grands them skills and attributes but that child awakened a mana tool which doesn't grand him any skills or attribute; his mana tool only shows him one thing - {0%}
what does it mean?? Come with me to find out !!
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Important points from author-
1- This is my first original novel.
2- English is not my main language.
3- I take various references from many places.
4- if you have any regarding problem with this Novel, please comment down below.
5- I want to create a free mc.
6- The cover is not mine, if you want me to take it down, notify me.
Thank you for reading this.
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since there is only one chapter now, some of the ratings might not make sense but either way, the premise of the story is great and the idea behind it is pretty nice, the world building and background seems to be pretty normal and this rating and author-san, you look like you have some good stuff planned out for us
yo potato here for some reviews ~ it's only 4 chapter so its not that much Writing Quality - it's good there's some few noticable typo but it's fine overall the choice of word is good simple and understandable. Story Development - we are still at ch 4 so I have nothing to say here yet Character Design - It's good I think the character design is kinda like japanese and chinese people combined or not. Updating Stability - daily World Background - the world Background is like Black Clover so far but I think it will improve more because the author said that he will take many references so anyway it's good so far. thoughts - this have a potential with that mana pool thingy and I think the concept is Cultivation tools x Mana skill. Its good so far but we don't know it's only 4 chapters but I hope the author will keep up the good work! that's it Potato is out~
Ok now that there have been more chapters, I love this. It's a mix of 2 of my favorite anime: black clover and mob psycho 100, will be waiting for more updates
All that matters to me is that the story is readable and it makes sense. Regardless, the book is fairly entertaining so I recommend you to read it as well.
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The concept of mana tools is really interesting, in my eyes. The character descriptions are also pretty good, although, not trying to sound rude or anything, but the writing quality sometimes hurts my eyes, it may only just be me, other than that, the novel is good.
Leids7 come to review! writing, okay! stories, okay! plots? What are you saying? Isn't seeing the protagonist the strongest even though he's actually the weakest one?!
Its a great story with amazing plot, reading such a unique story after a long while , its clear author has put a lot of effort in delivering this masterpiece to us,writing is superb and cant wait for more chapters 😊😊
This novel is awesome, I can not stop reading. please keep on updating more chapters[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good story, fascinating plot and awesome characters. really worth my time. my eyes shimmers every time i read this story, my excitement is indescribable for this story
preety good so far, a few typos but they are not irritating. To be honest I like the story setting but I know that the author will make many improvements. Personally I would prefer reading this in my free time while drinking a cup of coffee. I am not much of a review writer so I'll end it here.
A very good novel I hope this won't get drop so author 👌👍👏 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .................................. . .. .. .. ...
Interesting World Background.. The realtionship between brother and sister is cute..looking forward to their character development...keep going [img=recommend]
It has a promising future, the grammar is little bit bad but I can still read it clearly so 4 stars Kknjjvbjnbjkkkkkkkkkjjhhhhhjjjjjjjjjj
the premise of the story sounds interesting, but we'll have to wait till more chapters are released for a more concrete review. (i put 3 stars as a neutral)
Love this story❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 From the characters to the plot, everything is just 😘 Keep it up author😇
I give this story a 5 star rating because the development seems to be heading towards a favorable direction. This table is all about a child whose magical abilities are something left to be desired and who must face tribulations to potentially discover his place in the wider world.
I really love this book, the story setting is great, interesting character. The book has great potential author should keep on updating[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
If author doesn't give 5 stars to his first original novel then who will?? Thank you for reading..... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]