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The Chosen's Odyssey

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作者: Unorthadox01

4.34 (20 レビュー結果)

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In a world that had endured a galactic war lasting centuries, a young boy takes an entrance exam for one of the most prestigious sects.

He possesses an otherworldly handsome face and a charming smile that could captivate even Immortals and Deities alike.

With secrets that many would give anything for, he embarks on the challenging journey of cultivation, filled with successes and setbacks, highs and lows, and plenty of action in between.

Join him as he conquers the thrilling and erratic world of cultivation.

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    Daoistwaterdrop

    This book….. I love it, the author ticks every box you’d want in a harem novel. Mc ain’t a rapist/hypnotizing nonsense, he actually has game, handsome and is just a good person; rather than a loser who just lucked out on some powers. Author you have something good here, please don’t motivation and keep up the good work.

    1yr
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    Tenthousandsuns

    I ain’t even gonna say too much this novel has me craving for more👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 It’s so well written. I finally get why some people just want the author to keep doing their thing cause bro is killing it in this one. Excited for more chapters in the future!! Also hopefully it gets the spotlight it deserves✌🏾

    1yr
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    Vegardmk

    The first 100 chapers are just perfect. Love the mc, and everything about him. Writing is really good. Hope to see much more.

    1yr
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    loafing_lad

    I'm diving in hope it won't disappoint 😌

    1yr
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    DrakePhoenix

    Great job on your story telling

    1yr
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    SHADOWBLADE

    Great book, with good characters and few grammatical errors. I Liked the story progress and characters, tho I feel world Background could use a little more polishing as the author has used mordeen world x cultivation trope somewhat but there are a lot of times that leaves you wondering where the line will be drawn, I won't say more since it will be a spoiler but those two themes are difficult to mix. Tho author still does a decent work in that regard

    1yr
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    WanderingReader69

    I really enjoy the interactions between MC and his women/friends. So many likeable and most importantly relatable characters that many readers could possibly see themselves. So far the cultivation aspect seems a bit generic but that might be because MC is still at the bottom. I believe this novel has good potential and I’m excited for the future. Keep it up, Author

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    Rosana_Marques

    better than most novels on this app that get millions of views. chapters are long which is nice. can see this getting far if you keep up and have patience. good luck author

    1yr
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    toshisero

    i dropped on the when sect gave him spy mission when he is only in the sect for at most 1 month

    1yr
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    _Frost_
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    worth the read, been following this novel for what seems like maybe 2 months now. Happy to see it growing and hope it continues to. The characters have been developing nicely, author does a good job with the pacing with focusing enough time to develop a scene and while at the same time not overly dragging a event out.

    1yr
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    DrakePhoenix

    Loving this book so far great read can’t wait to catch up to the rest of the story So author are you going to make a discord

    1yr
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    Monkiiiy

    One of most engaging harem cultivation novels i read chapters are long enough and characters are fun and feels fresh.story makes you want more.

    1yr
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    ChamanLundoora

    Read the first chapter and I really loved it 😍😍😍

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    deutscherdrachen

    What a wonderful story. Definately a hidden gem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Kurt_van_Bragt

    its a really good book, the character development is really great. The writer knows exactly how get tou as reader immerserd in not only the story but also in the world behind the story. Altough there haven't been new updates on the story, it is still worth reading this as it is just such a good book.

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    Taylor9189

    ok, normally I tell people to be more descriptive, but in this case, you go on for so much that most chapters so far (35) feels like death by PowerPoint with filler content and little dialog. female descriptions could be better they feel 2D

    12mth
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    padfoot_thewog

    could have been a 4 out of five pretty decent cultivation novel if it wasn't for the 14 year old **** disgusting harem garbage the characters are so bland and the main character tries to Pretend that he is not a disgusting pig when he is i'm a dude by the way and I'm not a feminist I just find that he's a little **** **** It's such a shame too because the design of the cultivation system that he has made is pretty decent i'd give it an 8 out of 10 which is fairly rare in cultivation novels most are about a 6 such a shame

    1yr
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    Ayce_o_Spade

    Is there yuri of any kind in this MC’s harem? I can’t stand that stuff.

    1yr
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    Meta0202

    we know nothing about the main character of this story........... we know nothing about the main character of this story........... we know nothing about the main character of this story........... we know nothing about the main character of this story...........

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