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The Birth of a Speed God

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作者: M1l1t1a

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How much loss, sorrow, and responsibility must one take to be a hero?
The year was 2065; war raged between NATO and the members of the Warsaw pact. With "superhumans" on the rise, countries could fall at a moment's notice.
Daily life was fraught with uncertainty; taken from his family and twin brother, Lucas began to forge his path in this war-torn world.
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This is my first novel so id really appreciate a review, good or bad as long as it clearly points out a problem you have with whatever I would love to hear it.
Btw if you like speedsters or general struggling hero story I'm trying to cater to you. I have a lot of the plot worked out and will try to update regularly. I have school and work though so… yeah.

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I am the author, just have to accounts. This is my first light novel and I’d really like feedback. Good and bad, I know I need to improve. The updates will be kinda slow to start but once I hit a grove it will be good. Thx for visiting and I hope you enjoy.

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Look for the other post i already made. I have two accounts so yea. thought id do a review on my other just to get that drippy 5 star. Im planning on writing more and i am currently, its just slow since im still thinking of minor plot points and how i want characters to act n stuff. expect a cool MC in a bit.

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