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概要
A 16 year old genius boy from the 21st century gets reincarnated into the incredibly dangerous and exciting universe of Tensura 70 years before canon.
Follow his adventures and exiting life of how he came to be known as the "Hero of the Sun".
Notice of [Rewrite] on 27/3/2024
Note : The original story does not belong to me, it belongs to the original author fuse. this is a fanfic. I only own my Original character.
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Thanks author 😊 for you to create fanfiction tensura story with interesting premise, good romance and good explanation, I hope you have good health for continue this story 👍👍 again thanks for update 😊😁
Concept and idea of the fanfic is good, but the writing quality is not that good. Still acceptable for a Tensura Fanfic though. The romance felt rushed, and the pace is overall pretty fast. Also no updates. Pls understand that I have stated the negatives, there are also positives about this fic.
This is amazing! Description of the character of the characters, the staging of battles, the plot, everything is at the highest level! This is definitely 5/5! I'm not sure yet how things will be with Canon and Rimuru, given that the fate of Rimuru and its development depended on Shizue's death, but keep it up, Author! I'm looking forward to the sequel.[img=update][img=recommend]
Keep up the good work. Story is quite good just little bit fast pace. Grammar is in good conditions. Maybe story needs time skip to when original story starts. Maybe you can do more research on Astras because on power scale the normal astra are more power full than what you have shown in story. Because different astra has diff power some might be single kill some might be area kill astra for example. brahmastra is power full enough to destroy whole world. And Vasavi skati is a single kill astra.
Very enjoyable fanfic with good characters and a cheesy and fluffy romance between Shizue and MC. Will be looking forward to reading more.
The story is very good and entertaining. The character interactions started out as a bit bland, but it got better overtime and they feel actually alive now and possessing personality that accurately represents their character. Although sometimes they can be a bit unsatisfying with abrupt cut offs, like with Milim after their first meeting. Other than that I'm glad this did not go the idiotic catch-em-all harem route, and the romance between MC and Shizue is very lovely and extremely refreshing. Power developments have also been quite interesting and unique in a way, considering MC doesn't have traditional cheat type abilities and is actually developing his strength over a period of time through training and fighting.
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Grammar : Good - Five StarPlot Story : Good - Five StarCharacter Design : Good - Five StarUpdate : Good - Five StarWorld background : Good - Five Star-Everything Is good, I give this novel five star and don't forget to read my novel to, thank you.
Good story, good plot and good writing. No grammar mistakes at all and the author knows his thing. It's been a while since I binged read any fic, also a very good and lovely romance, Shizu being his lover is the last straw that hooked me, also no harem, I love this story..Hope you won't drop.
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It's one of the best Tensura fan-fics I've read. Keep up the good work, and I hope you don't drop this author san.
its good very unique from any other tensura fanfic good grammar and update stability hope it continue being not harem and just shizue[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
U know karn nickname is hero of charity... So the ultimate skill which suit karn is charity king Raquel or agni lord of sun. Karn is know for his warrior quality. Karn equipment should be of mythical grade.
hope you do great in your Exam! Author-San! and Remember that even if you fail! I'm still here for you! -Maria
This is the best fanfic i‘ve read in a minute all I gotta say is this is just too peak to stop writing if you stop posting at least stop at chapter 150😭
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Quite good for now, as of present, it has 3 chapters and it was quite good, grammar is also great. If the author continues this, definitely recommend.