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Tenfold Payback system

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作者: VoidSystem

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how it will affect the world when one ordinary guy possess a system that makes him the most richest man in the world?

will the world change for the better ?

having a system is a dream come true for many, follow our MC in his journey to world domination with his sysrem
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this is a parallel world from our earth

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it's a good cashback story, especially because it is not a random cashback. Instead, it's a fixed 10x cashback. (switches between pesos and dollars) but the guy is too extra for me. At least some things make sense at the start, like investing gives a cashback and being able to receive a steady flow of cashback money by spending money for his restaurant. But then he gets into blackmarket and illegal stuff like funding and training a weapons dealer. the skills and disciples concept is OK, but to me, unless you can secure their 100% loyalty, then its pointless. he should just live a lavish life of a young master get all the girls, and be able to laze around. I get their needs to be problems along the way, but still, I don't really understand why he is going into the black market other than being a bit wary of the future. Maybe it's something I don't understand, so I apologise to the author if it offended you, but again, this is just my opinion.

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