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Naraku, a modern human, transmigrates into the world of Tales of Demons and Gods as a young master of the Sacred Family. He inherits a powerful God template—a scientific seal—that accelerates his cultivation by absorbing the world's karma.
Using his status, Naraku gathers resources, tricks, and provokes others, all while maintaining a heroic façade. His powers, drawn from dark arts and demonic cultivation techniques, evolve as he absorbs more energy and abilities.
Behind the scenes, he orchestrates events to further his grand goal: transcending life and death to achieve immortality and divinity.
I will be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com
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Did anyone read the Synopsis? Care to explain in brief? And author, or translator, please shorten that abysmal synopsis... 2 or 3 paragraphs are more than enough to get the idea, you know.
Yo don't drop this fanfic. The story is good and I like the way it goes, except a story like cannon for a whole chapter was annoying. I don't mind the slow update but dont make a chapter the same as cannon storyline, its like telling us what we already know. (That part where Nie lie hunt those sheep)
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The story is good and has potential, but there are some problems. 1 - The pace is extremely slow. One discussion lasted 7 chapters, and considering that the author posts 1 chapter per day, you need to wait a week to read the conclusion of a discussion. 2 - There are many inconsistencies. At times the MC acts as if he knows the whole story, at other times he acts as if he has no idea what is going on, like he doesn't know what is happening with Xia Ning'er's body, or the problem she has with Ye Zingun. 3 - Too many words and nothing added. Out of the 13 chapters, at least 3 chapters were just talking about Nie Li's past, to the point that at times I just started skipping everything that was written while looking for the next dialogue. My thoughts: The story has potential, it has an interesting system, but at the pace it's going, I would recommend waiting for it to have at least 30 to 50 chapters before you try to read it, since reading 1 chapter a day will leave you more frustrated than satisfied.