/ Anime & Comics / TBATE:Journey to The Horizon
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The journey of a young man
It all began when he died, and his journey started into a world of magic and wounders from a novel he read "The Beginning After the End"
Will this soul prevail or will the darkness of the world swallow him.
Its my first book so l hope you like it
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Really cool story. I am really excited to see him rank up as a demon and see him kill all these bandits and also to see how he participates in war.
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it's a really good story, like how different it is from other tbate ff where the mc becomes Arthur's twin and the demon race. you made a great start of the story tho i do recommend using " " these when people are talking since it's confusing some of the time. Anyway that's it, hope you won't drop this fic and I'm looking forward to the story so keep up the work author-kun.
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Amazing bloody story!!!! I am super excited for its future. Keep up the great work author!
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The story would've been much better if the mc reincarnated as a teen/adult instead we have god baby
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the beginning is different but still the same .... the text of the conversation and explanation is almost the same, I mean sometimes don't use the sign " .... and doesn't explain mc's goals other than training, let's see like the characters Naruto, Luffy, Asta, even Issei dragon oppai also has a goal.....and after chapter 20 who knows what the MC's mind is friendly with the main character and enters the academy for no apparent reason, if an MC like Cid Kagenou wants to act I won't question it
So far the ff is Good. It's nice that you haven't made the MC related to Arthur. I have often seen ffs where MC is twin or something else...but this take is great. The thing that upsets me is the pacing and it's story development. It's fast...like he just go brrrr. I do like the way...but it just seems so fast that the immersion in the ff gets broken. Smol chaps...that's another thing. The character design on the MC and other characters are shown less so that makes other people who came to read may get confused. Overall experience: It's great and I would recommend it. Ps. If author could work a little bit more on character design and background ..this ff would become Great. It has great potential to be in the rankings.