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Leonard Lu, a 21 years old Asian Male. He is a shut-in loser in life who is addicted to playing games, reading light novels, manga/manhua/ and manwha 16 hours a day, 7 days a week since he was Freshman in HighSchool.
Everything changed one day when he was having a cup of instant noodle for lunch while going through a sketchy forum he founded on the internet which hosted by a person who names himself “God”. The forum was for discussing the topic: “What would happen if you threw a certain loser in life into a fantasy world?”
Weirdly enough Leonard himself was the only guest that was on the forum- and he also had a habit of wanting to be the first one to reply. He promptly replies with a sentence to “GoD”:
“Many possibilities- the loser will either die because of his incompetence or thrive if he’s lucky- depends if he has one of those cliche cheats or not, an example would be a cheat system.”
Instantly “God” himself reply to him:
“Then what would happen if I throw you into that situation? With a cheat system of course.”
Leonard then replies absentmindedly:
“I will become a god who would act on all my desires.”
“God”’s response is:
“I wish you luck then, mortal.”
Before he could process the meaning behind those weird last words, Leonard chokes on the instant noodle that he was eating, then dies alone, in his room.
(A/N: there are grammar mistakes, you have been warned. Just cross your fingers that Grammarly(Free Version) actually fixed it. This is a fanfiction that’s crossed with anime and games. (by that I mean world hopping) Along with my own original world.)
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The fact that my review was blocked just because it was pointing out the obvious flaws is weird. I criticized the author for his terrible world building, insane, rushed developments & this terrible system. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________. Example 1: MC Leonard was talking to his family and a girl, and the author forces some stupid, Almighty being to just magically transport the MC & company into a damn zombie 'The Walking Dead' world, so the MC can get stronger. Seriously? Let's just go to a new zombie world guys, so forgot the previous world that I barely even talked about. So we had to deal with this rushed 'The Walking Dead' arc .__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Example 2: The author wants us to believe that people in this world are so stupid, that they view ELVES as actual demons. The continent where ELVES live, is called the Demon Continent. Magic casting, bow shooting, affinity for nature, hunting, things we know elves for, all completely forgotten. Different groups like Forest/High/Dark...etc Elves are all now EVIL DEMONS in the eyes of this specific world. I understand wanting to be unique, but trying to make elves come off as "demons" is just...no. Author does not even mention WHY this world hates elves, or what the elves did to be called "Demons." With the real demon people in other stories, some are good and bad, like any group of beings. If you are going to write about fantasy, do it correctly. How stupid would a book sound if it mentioned dragons as "orcs," or if you talked about fairies as "ghosts," or if humans were called "beastmen." Like no niqqa, I don't have a damn lion head, I am a human. Just like these elves are elves, not demons. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ These identities exist for a reason, and trying to change them to make humans seem that stupid, is not helping you at all. It just shows how terrible your world's backstory will end up, and terrible it is. We only heard about a few kingdoms, one being the Kingdom of Evergreen, and that is all. This brand new world full of possibilities, and the author barely even talks about it. He spends more time talking about this random loli Mavis that the MC met (harem member) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Example 3: MC obtains a damn zombie army as a reward from the system, since he is a Necromancer. Now, we've all read books on how you must conceal that dark, death energy, because all of the holy churches/strong worldly people near you can sense it. This world fears necromancers due to their history. The MC might be evil and kill them all to make a stronger army. What does the MC do with this zombie army out in public lol? He somehow just makes the zombies go around town and hides them... with no one seeing a zombie or sensing all that damn zombie army death energy.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I understand magic ONLY works how the author writes it, so if there is no death energy to even conceal, then people can't sense any of this evil, death energy that an army of zombies would normally give off. The problem is that the author doesn't even bother about magic and how it actually works in this damn world. So, whether or not an army of zombies SHOULD leak out some death energy, is 100% on the author to tell the readers. (which was never specified in any of the chapters) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Example 4: In chapter 80, the MC has a damn dagger against his neck, ready to be killed at any moment by this powerful, rank 7 assassin called Luminous. She's an Inquisitor of the Holy Church. MC mentally talks to the system, then commands two zombie knights via mental orders, & instantly subdues this powerful assassin. As an assassin especially, she should NOT be this easy to take down or subdue. Where are the escape tactics? shadow magic? Does she not have a brain to use? In fact, she knows he is a necromancer due to all these damn zombies she fought previously. Once he dies, the zombies will revert back to their old nature. All she had to do was just kill him, which was VERY easy to do; but nope, the author has this crappy plot armor where she somehow can't even think due to the zombie "surprise", and gets caught by two weak ass zombies. In just a few sentences, she swears her allegiance to the MC and serves him so she can live. Like, seriously, this is so shxtty to read sometimes. Logic is thrown out of the window during fight scenes._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Example 5: Chapter 100, he was then sent to the wonderful game world that is SWORD ART ONLINE. Yes guys, if you can't tell, the author is just sending the MC to the worlds of other authors, and having random things occur. He seriously has Kirito and the MC battling dungeon bosses... I could understand these events if this was supposed to be a fan novel for SAO, or The Walking Dead, but it isn't. So making your MC hop into worlds that other authors have made, it just shxtty writing on your part. Be original and stop making the MC enter worlds we already read about. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Example 6: chapter 171 turns into a **** scene with the MC Leonard and harem member Ryan (she abused him & r@ped him before). She wants him to nut inside and take responsibility (GIVE HER A BABY). MC surprisingly shoots his load inside after thinking it through...yeah, give her the pill or magical abortion lol. Chapter 185 is just the author using some names from the Overlord anime series to describe the new Lich servant....like come on, how is this novel 5 stars to anyone? I understand wanting to pay some respect to other authors if they inspired you, but to blatantly use their names and their worlds is NOT good writing. World building does not exist basically. The MC is so bland, so you can imagine that the side characters are there just to exist, and obey the MC. I would feel nothing if any of them died, because the author has made them to have no personality. This novel is 3 stars, AT BEST. Be wary when reading this if you are looking for a serious novel to read. If you don't mind all of the issues, it is still a somewhat okay novel to read if you can forgot about logic and whatnot.
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So as an avid reader of this and many sites, I can say the story has promise. What I am really confused about is the amount of visceral hate or anger thrown at this and many other authors. A reminder to to the clueless, we are reading for free (most of the time). I understand corrective criticism can help, but most of the comments just trash the author or are extremely hateful. Let's get it together readers or what will we read when no one wants to deal with the situation. Self fulfilling prophecy.
Thick Skin, I'm just shamelessly giving my own creation a 5 stars review. -still work in progress so update will be quite irregular. (reason is: coming up with ideas, editing and removing grammar(grammar nazi scare me) + there's still life.) Discord :https://discord.gg/GUrwPgG
too much nonsense going on . the plot is messed up . even the MC is messed up . 100 chapters in but the MC is weak as a pig. even in normal translation NOVEL the MC can be strong.. but the MC in this novel is like a pig , he even got a SYSTEM. character's name are so fvcked up. no naming sense. story development are so forced. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK. the dialogues are dumb as a chicken , too much redundancy. (DROPPED)
This is my first review here. I would say the story is good. Same cliche dying and transporting to other world with some op system, has I have read all the chapters till now the system is not op and mc haven't abused his system to become strong he is becoming strong by training and earning experience for leveling. Until now only two worlds have been introduced in novel first is the mc home world which is fill with magic and sword. Second world is of "walking dead" yes that right zombie apocalypse world were **** happen. This novel look promising and good to read even if you haven't played,read or watch walking dead you know what is happening. I will if you you love system novel with multiple world travel is 'GO' from me. That's all
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I do not recommend anyone to read this. Total waste of time, no sense or logic, tons of ****ass fillers, sachi was made as an important while she should just drop dead, levels, stats and system were not mention for almost 40chapters randomely then and there. Total trash to be honest here. Also imagination of OP the author can think of is just childish i mean just seeing 10 people max commending on each chapter just shows how bad this is. Last but not least dont do harem when you cuckolding yourself i mean seriously though what is this 10yo novel! Gosh i wanna go relax this novel made my day worse.
Nothing but Support for our Trap Author ..................................,..........................................................Damn this 140 character limit
update of my old review: chapter 170 is all I have to use to justify everything. it is one of the most awful and offensive things I have ever read.
"Leonard Lu, a 21 years old Asian Male. He is a shut-in loser in life who is addicted to playing games, reading light novels, manga/manhua/ and manwha 16 hours a day, 7 days a week since he was Freshman in HighSchool." Oniichan_Thickskin is this an autobiography?
It's one of many reviewers kekeke ~ It's my second nooo first review Muhahahaha !! Fighto ou thor-san keep it up !!! Tag? #System #Reincarnation #Anime #Movie #MultipleUniverse #Harem
Fellow Author deserves 5 stars. Lets see how it will turn out in the future. As an author I should have the talent to fill 140 restriction without bullsh*t. Here we go.
Good it’s actually good Oh my god good amazing excellent wow *clap* *clap* meme review it really good I recommend you watch it i mean read it’s a masterpiece
5 star it all, cuz why not😂 Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmkay drugs are bad. Bye ^-^
5 star cause i like it and many hater review that only give one star cause of their selfishness without positive criticism. If you don't like it or feel something wrong just tell your opinion to author so he can improve or just leave the novel and read other novel rather than giving one star review cause of your ego
One of the best originals i read, i liked the creativity of the author where he had several ideas mixed in the story:the concept of terror infinity, the basic reincarnation story, cultivation, system based story. All of these may seem copied or boring if one of them came separately it would have been a boring old story but the fact that he combined such elements to deliver such good story is very commendable, i think the reviewers shouldn't be so hard on the writer, it is true that he should work more on details and events but he has an amazing plotline and terrifying creativity
ネタバレを明かす another shameless review. I try to draw my MC face and posted it on Discord. needless to say it ended up quite....I honestly don't know how to describe it.
Don't mind me~ I'm just once again shamelessly putting up a review for my novel, gotta give it some rating since Webnovel said the rating aren't enough :L hold this won't be a complete waste. -A method to get over the grammars issue is to immerse yourself in the "Dao of Machine Translation"... well that's how I learn to ignore most grammars I found on fanfiction anyway, I don't know about you guys.
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The world is pretty much non existent, the dialogue structure is a bit confusing because it interrupts the flow and suddenly switches the person of reference, which makes it a bit erratic. The character has no depth, nor any defining characteristics. They aren't even cardboard cut out but so much as stick figures? The maid who has only spoken a handful of times has the same personality development as the main character as of this point in time. There are events which happens, but aren't interesting nor do they add to the plot. Such as the rebellion in which his magical swords were needed for his brother's army. Or perhaps the main character getting back at the old dude at the auction house for swindling him. They are mentioned, but never go anywhere. The main character is literally being handed everything, and yet he is incredibly weak, but he's not hard working, climbing up the power rank to become stronger, nor is he the lazy or carefree type, he's also no the cold and ruthless killer that's a genius. This is a very strange system novel since the system itself isn't interesting and seems to only be a method of plot hole coverage/method of the author to suddenly say "screw the rules this is happening"? He's...actually just a loser? But not as in "yeah no duh dude he's supposed to be a loser, haven't you read the synopsis?" He's STILL a loser even after the system and months of being in the other world. He doesn't use his modern knowledge so his background is kind of redundant, he obviously doesn't carry our Morales either as someone from the 21st century. He's just not really interesting, the most expressive act of his we've had in 40+ chapters was when he was laughing about making money, but it wasn't very humorous in my opinion. Excessive greed and stupid schemes can be amusing if done correctly such as in Legendary Moonlight Sculptor for example to reference a famous work, but in this it felt stale and dry. A lot of time the nerd of loser has impressive knowledge of certain subjects (be they tropes such as in Everyone Else is a Returnee, surviving in the wild, common 21st century sense, science, math, army formations, COOKING etc) The biggest thing that attracts people to system and cultivation novels in my opinion is power fantasies and suspense. We enjoy the hype, the build up, the triumph of the hero defeating a foe who he couldn't before, the surpassing of ones limits, picking up hot chicks with different charms perhaps for those who like harems...the exploring of new worlds and realms...and yet for something who's premise is all about system and going to new worlds, even the first world isn't explained in more depth than a summary. "Spy Kids" or "Sharkboy and Lavagirl" (a really old movie that was made for kids around 10 years old) has a much better developed world and characters. The system is really boring, he literally doesn't do anything and it solves everything. Oh language barrier? 5 minutes and I solve it. Oh no cultivation method? You're useless and can't do anything? No problem here you go. Btw it'll automatically give you power and level up everyday just by you breathing! Spoiler alert The first world he went to was walking dead...Why? Of all the world possible...why that one? And why take his cousin? In fact why take any other character especially when they have no personality to speak of and when theres so much you could still flesh out of your currently world? It seemed like the author was just..bored? or too lazy to continue and so he said screw it and pulled a Deus Ex Machina...literally....Also, the walking dead isn't a good choice because its full of normal zombies..slow stupid and not a threat to someone who's supposedly 5 times stronger than a normal person and can use magic, who also has a master magical elf maid, and who also has a PESUDO DEMI GOD in the form of a body guard...and yeah I guess you could have them evolve...but that ruins the premise of the series in and of itself, especially when you have them try to follow the plot even though its completely illogical to do so? I mean you might as well use Resident Evil or something else? It seems as if the author only does so as to bandwagon on the success and hype of a well known series to attempt to boost his own because of a lack of creative process in the works of this novel. This is like in a Naruto fanfic where they give Naruto the Sharingan, but the plot still follows the Naruto series perfectly. Not even in the Sims game are the characters so unresponsive to the world. Not a bad concept (not anything original either, but I'm a sucker for these over used tropes) but I honestly think the author would be better off starting over from scratch and taking his or her time to rework everything, flesh out the plot and the characters, establish the world, plan ahead. It could become a worth wild read. Maybe take some time to read Terror Infinity who has a similar basis for inspiration.