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System Gacha Multiverse (For rewriting)

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作者: KiraWolf

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Author's message: I am currently correcting the chapters

Tom is a former Otaku and a total gacha addict. During his first life he died in an operation

In the second life he became Thomas Gray a son of a successful businessman

Unfortunately nothing is forever, due to a strange project of his uncle, his father went crazy and killed his mother

Things went from bad to worse

One day during an earthquake his apartment collapses, he is crushed to death in the rubble with his friend Julian

What awaits you in this third opportunity?

Will he be able to get the strength to take revenge?

I do not own the anime / manga / and more mentioned in this fic besides my MC and some OCs

Anyone who sees and warned me of errors in writing or any other that leaves out there in the chapters is always welcome. Thanks so much for reading

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Sokanas
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@Chapter 59 - Author still has trouble with his/her she/him Story is erratic and hard to follow and very random in a bad way. I really want to like this but it is actual work to read and not super entertaining.

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Fenrirzero9999

I think it’s a good novel but it’s also confusing and the template system is good but he should build is power on is own or using the gacha ressource

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PrimalVoidDragon

There's too much grammatical errors and the characters are sometimes been used in a confusing way. There's potential though if a good editing work is done

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