System Awakening: From Nothing to Everything

LV 2

S_Wolfe

The novel has promise everything is nice so far but it could be more descriptive more vivid scenes could be added it would help make the novel seen more alive but it's an amazing novel. Good job author

well I'm new on webnovel, this is my first novel so i don't really know if what I'm about to say is correct. but this novel might just be one of the best I'll ever read

the novel has good potential, at least for now though, keep it up sage writer. the novel really got me waiting

LV 12

Iampixie15

My honest reviews for the book. Characters: The characters are amazing, especially MC and his friends. The side characters are fine, I guess. World Background: The world building is good as well, but it doesn't feel fantasy like enough(I'm not sure there's a fantasy tag there). For now, the world feels like a dystopian futuristic, but that's all. The power systems or the powers themselves aren't given much focus. It doesn't feel action-y or adventure-y enough. Also the bleak reality that you try to paint is working well because I hate the characters other than the MC and his friends. MC: Mc starts out weak (and a little pathetic) which makes sense considering the books's name, but I don't think webnovel readers want to wait 40 chapters for there to be any sign of development especially regarding the powers, like we don't know what they even are (I'm sure there's a good in-world, let the author cook explanation, but still).Also MC doesn't assign stat points, I'm not really sure why but I guess it's for making the MC weak, but at least he should use it more times (like the time when the were caught by a teacher). Also please don't drop the book[img=update][img=update].