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概要
Yukan Norio, a boy living in Konoha with the soul of an earth resident.
He was an unplanned element who interfered with the course of the original story.
But, what if he also created some unexpected things?
What if there are unexpected twists?
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The Mc's behavior in the first few chapters is like that of an idiot. It is because someone living in our world would not be experienced in fighting and killing.
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Good so far, but hard to think even with 18% of Benimaru combat ability he can't take on 7 Genins.
The start of this novel was good. But as it went on and on I felt myself not liking it more and more, and now at chap 24 I have given up on it. I think the author did not research the character of sakumo before writing this. He is shown sometimes silly, sometimes ruthless and sometimes even incompetent as a ninja. I get that the author is trying to justify the person of cannon kakashi by making it such that it looks like it came from sakumo but that was not the case, his lazy, carefree, treating everyone as a child was a way of coping with all the trauma he went through. Another thing is the reincarnation aspect of the mc, never it was used apart from the starting chapter. The only good thing about this novel for me was the grammar. It was much better than what we see on this website, but in the end grammar can only take you so long.
good ff but not for me.. new strong enemy clan, MC go to war for years doesn't train Cakra control and he is a reincarnator.... buruh ok. i don't like V2, it remind me of boruto with ITS flashback, sorry i just not into it. then another oc come, he is on par with Kakashi a genius, a chunin sakumo son, want to be MC diciple, either he is super ggeniuss or Madara pawn just like kawasaki and jijigen/isski. i just hope no other strong oc or another strong clan cause at that point it Will be AU naruto
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the story is very good but this is not suitable for me, well that's all ......................................................................................................................................................................
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Starts out good but slowly getting worse. Not sure how much research the author has done but either tons other Fan-Fics are wrong or the author gets a fair bit wrong. Like I get AU but without a reason or acknowledgment it comes across as just a mistake
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awesome, what can I say, much better than many other books.............. .............................................................................................................
Currently at 7 chapters, it is going good. Hope the author continues The stability of updates is pretty good. This can be quite a good work.
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1. The story does not have harem 2. No hardcore romance 3. The protagonist has a system but still does the grind 4. Please do a review after you read the story otherwise....