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概要
All of it started on the Earth. The most Isolated planet in the entire Multiverse.
Saying it was tragic would be a big understatement for the beings, named humans, on this planet.
Well, maybe it was except for one, who only cared for himself and the closest beings to him...
We don't know how, or why, he became like he did, and accomplished what he did.
All we know, all the Multiverse knows, is that he didn't care for anything and wouldn't help anyone unless there was something in it for him.
That is unless he felt like helping you or caring about something... but that came at a cost.
Some say that you had to sell your soul to him, others say you became his loyal servant through black magic.
What is fact and what is fiction, many don't know... about him who goes by the name of Dark King by some and Ruthless Adventurer by others.
That is unless you are me, who sees him as someone else and by another name...
And that is... I see him as a kind person to those he takes in as friends and a ruthless monster to his enemies.
He is known to me by the name his parents gave him... the name Abel.
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This is my first novel, so pleeeease take it easy on me.
I hope that you can give me positive feedback, like telling me what you would like to see more of in the novel and what you think I can change.
Other than that, I hope you enjoy the book, and anything you gift me so that I can do this full-time would make me appreciate you a lot.
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although I've read only the first 2 chapters I'm already into this book..I'm loving the mystery and the way the author detailed his workkeep the flags flying 😁
Congratulations on getting contracted, Moo! This novel is definitely a must read [img=recommend] Its elements will get you hooked, and you won't even realize you have already reached the last chapter. Check this novel out!
Honestly, a rare gem. Solid characters with solid development. Perfectly paced and packs a power, engaging progression. Expecting to read more along the course of this fantastic journey.
To tell you the truth, it's really an interesting story! I like how the story goes and the plot is very captivating. And a main character with cubby features is rare. Keep it up!
First, the synopsis can be improved, especially the first two sentences because when I read it, it confused me a little bit. I have to read the paragraph 5 times before understanding it lol. As for the contents, the grammars and punctuations are good. The way the author described the scenes are smooth, but one thing that threw me off was the first chapter. Personally, it was confusing since perhaps the synopsis didn't introduce the important elements that could be read in the novel. As I was reading, it felt like it was too abrupt, and it didn't let me process the character's background or something like that. It's just my opinion, so do what's best for your novel. Other than that, the author described the scenes with simple words that I could easily understand, so I was able to visualize it properly. Overall, this novel has potential and I look forward to the mc's development [img=recommend]
Even though there is not much information about MC past life and introduction on first chapter is a little bit lack of detail, but the writing is easy to understand and the story is look promising. Keep up your good work!
amazing potential for the plot keep it up and the writing is nice and their is always a chance to improve
Really intriguing premise, keep it up and looking forward to more things from you! This story has a lot going for it and I really hope this blows up!
There's definitely a lot more room for improvement in the writing. It would also be better if the characters' features are described more. Nonetheless, the story itself is interesting enough to make you want to read 👍🏻
Not gonna lie, your work has an amazing amount of potential. Keep up this quality and you'll soon get your breakthrough.
The first chapter lays a solid foundation for the story. The characters are well-described with some great points introduced. The first chapter introduces intriguing elements such as the MC's parents and the experiment they underwent and the rebirth of the MC. I believe it's a good story with a great premise, and I will definitely continue following it.
so far it seems to have a good foundation hopefully you expand upon it further in future chapters i think you had some good ideas in this [img=recommend]
I think your story has an interesting and captivating start. Your writing style is good where I feel quite enjoyable to read. Just keep up your good work!
From what I have read the first chapter creates a good foundation for the story to be built up upon. The characters are described well. But at least for me the description of the world itself should be flushed out more. The first chapter sets up several intriguing story pieces as the parents and the experiment the MC went. It would befit the story in saying it's in the future this would give more creative freedom to work with more sci fi ideas and concepts that may befit your overall story like alien races, planets or other kinds of things that would give your story a more distinctive feel. But i think it's a good story and we'll be sure to keep up with it
Interesting so far but its only the first chapter will put this in my collection since it has potential hope you update often author. this has a lot potential.
tbh, I couldn't say much since the story is still fresh but I can see the efforts that the author has put into making the first chapter. Although I do recommend to separate the dialogues in new paragraphs.
Mr. Author here!Please give my book a chance, maybe leave a review and some votes🫣Otherwise, I will be re-reading my chapters as I go along to enhance the reader experience and to correct issues or to add things that are suggested in paragraph comments so yeah add this to your library if you read PLEASE!