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How does a half-grown mountain village boy like me end up bizarrely becoming the grandmaster out of nowhere?
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The translation is fine. It's a shame that the story lacks any real depth or substance. There are too many dialogues, and not enough descriptive narration about what is happening. Failure to do so means readers are left wondering about the world-building. It's like mindlessly watching a shuttlecock getting pass from one side of the net to the other. The dialogues are aplenty, but they feel flat and lifeless because there is no distinct characterization. All in all, a horrible piece of fiction that feels like it's written by a teenager. The only reason why I read it was to obtain Fast Pass to unlock chapters. What a waste of my 10 minutes. 1/10
Translation quality and character design/ writing is good. The only issue I have is that I don't understand where the author is going with this story, which is why I gave a 1 to story development. So far we don't have any clue of the world nor do we know where the story is heading. The synopsis doesn't help either. I'm currently at chapter 20 and I'll read till chapter 25 to 30 if nothing happens I'll drop. if it gets better I'll give an update
translator really need to change the novel. the translation already good but the novel really just empty inside.so bland till chapter 11,and i cannot bring myself to read more of this anymore
Translation is horrible the novel is meh and I couldn’t keep reading it after chapter 15
I may just have high quality taste in novels but, so far really nothing has happened at chapter 12 we have gotten no introduction to the world only a bunch of children acting like adults and our MC an adult goofing off. He knows how big of an opportunity it is to learn and he’s just skipping classes and not attempting to learn anything or trying to train after he was told how far behind he is.