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a man died and was given a power of sunshine or so it was supposed to be.
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HAHA A novelAbout me Am i that Famous even after dieing.u are worthy of lion sin escanor.Tho mael my predeccesor saws its ass...........................
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a fun story to read pls don drop this, Escanor is one of mine fav characters, love how you made him OP xdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
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You clearly do not know how to write a story, the story itself is not bad, your grammar is, it is awful. ........................................................................................................
some grammar mistakes but overall a great story but you made him strong a bit too much almost killing Loke in that merely move then what about a real punch who can take it