/ Fantasy / Sundaram Tamas in the Mystic Verse
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At the beginning, when primordial beings didn't exist, concept was just a thought as the fabric of the universe basked in nothingness. There came a group of powerful beings know as gods, they created a bloodline of Temple Keepers . With the ability to bend reality to their thoughts, they nurture the Primordial beings and perfect the concepts of life or so they thought.
As a result, time and space where born. They experimented creating worlds individually but that could only keep them busy for so long. Bored with the curse of immortality, they assign a Watcher as they are put to eternal slumber. The Primordials seize this opportunity to rule over the masses that the gods once rule. The chaos created is so great to bear as their nature becomes a hindrance to conquering a lost territory.
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A high podium is seen above this sea of people that stretched through out the city.
"This day have we come to your rescue. To deliver you from the hell of freedom..." A deep inhuman voice roars from it's massive body as he gripped the podium tightly.
"Yes!!" The crowd roars causing a slight rumble as the masses cry in unison. Not bothered but their closeness as one thing clouded their mind.
A dark smile embraced his lips as loses himself gripping the pulpit so tightly as he stretches each side apart tearing it down. And flinging it of the podium but no one cares anymore, they make way for the incoming object but don't stop roaring for a second.
"Welcome to the New Order!!"
Series of maniac laughter break from the mindless crowd.
A new order
#Mystic Verse
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Nice, very nice. You've all my support for this projet bro. As soon as I am back I am greeted by such a wonder. I am so happy that the project has moved forward. Can't wait to see where things take you.👌
bro I'm very happy that you mention how MysticVerse and shouting out my pen name but it's chunibyoo
First one here! Yes! I'm so glad I stumbled upon this gem of a book! Very clear descriptions and smooth dialogues. Overall I'd give this a seven, because it's still new and doesn't have much to ride on. Nonetheless, as far as introductions go, this novel's first chapter was not a bore and definitely has suspense. I love the fact MC might be a girl, and an overpowered one maybe. Anyhow, I'm excited to see how this book progresses! Author-san I need more chapters quickly!
This book is astonishing, it's really cool. Dialogues are nice, writing quality is spectacular and the description are amazing. I need the Author to keep updating this book because I'll love to see where it all ends. Good luck Author 👍 I'll be expecting more chapters.[img=update]
In Sundaram Tamas' mesmerizing Mystic Verse;. The characters, vividly portrayed with depth and emotion, captivate the heart and invite contemplation. The synopsis was intricately crafted and unfolds like a melody, resonating with both the ethereal and the earthly. With its seamless fusion of spirituality and storytelling, Sundaram Tamas has truly crafted a literary treasure, a testament to the power of words and the transformative magic of storytelling. Th missing peice really is just the stability of updates but I know why so its fine thanks for the good read bro
The plot is engaging, while the story itself is enjoyable. The writing quality is smooth and fits with the theme of the story. It's too early to tell, but it seems this novel has ample potential. Keep up the good work, author!
the synopsis is very compelling though it being a chapter in itself lol. Everything was so clear from the first two chapters and the scenes were amazingly descriptive
I really enjoyed the story, especially the development of the protagonist, and how things unfold without unnecessary dragging. I'm looking forward to seeing how things will progress.
The story needs direction. The first chapter is weird to my taste. I can't judge much since it is only chapter three
I would like to appreciate the author for the hard work he/she is putting into writing. I would like to get more of this book keep up
The synopsis hooked me, so here I am: This story is interesting, I'm expecting an engaging story, and I look forward to seeing how it will develop.