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Starting a new faction in the Halo universe with StarCraft Technology
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Jean Razak just a regular normal young adult with a balanced lifestyle between gaming,study and work. Somehow out of nowhere he was transported to another planet with similar environments to earth. He gained power called [SYSTEM] bullsh1t he read most of the time to the point been tired of the genre. The task appears and was forced upon him or he died as punishment Without a way getting back to his old world he had no choice to comply.If succeeded he might return to his original dimensions.
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[~ANOTHER RANDOM THOUGHT OF MINE AFTER READING A STORY WITH SIMILAR NAME AND PLOT.ALSO I HAVE LIMITED KNOWLEDGE ABOUT BOTH FRANCHISE SO EXPECT A LOT OF INFORMATION ERROR. DON'T MIND ME THO. I'M DOING THIS FOR HOBBY~]
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While I had some expectations but the irregular and slow update schedule makes it annoying .
So far, the story is very good. However, if I were to give any sort of advice, it would be to either find someone to review your writing to proofread and help polish your grammar or use an online service that does the same thing like Grammarly it's just a matter of preference on which to go with on the other hand you could do what some authors do and have the readers make use of paragraph comments to point out grammar errors and improve your writing skills that way.
😑😐😀😃😆💝👍 Good start just take it slow in the beginning with the development of the characters and the world building and you will he one of the best stories that I have read.