/ Fantasy / Start from the golden desert
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Haotian set foot on the sacred continent filled with swords and magic, and awakened the lord system there. Although his territory was located in the barren Karar Desert, he nevertheless obtained the super god-level lord talent - a random military building every week. The "Elf Mother Tree" of the natural elves. And the "Dragon's Nest" of the dragon clan.
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Good writing, fast paced and no filler chapters. World building could be improved a bit though.
Although this seem to be translated by chatgpt the author refined it so it is 100 times better the MTL I used to read.I am myself is not a English speaker so this level of grammar is good enough for me.Thanks Author!!!Keep up the good work!!!And Plz don't drop this🥹🥹🥹
read until chapter 7 than the main characters name got switched to "Lin Yi" randomly.... His orginal name was Haotian. So, I understand it's still a Chinese name but how does it switch to a entirely different name. This lasts for two chapters and I stopped since if this happened now than it will probably be worse later. The novel is super fast paced and there is not any background given of why he wanted to "rebel" which is stupid since the Author could of made the novel 100x better if he/she just took like 30-40 chapters and expanded on the world background and the family the MC is currently from.
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