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Messi, Latai, BTS, Kavir will be playing against their forever opponent Dawki Public School. On the other hand Raman, the temporary games teacher of Shillong High school got a chance to make his job permanent by winning the match. If they win the match, Messi will get a full funded scholarship. Akash, captain of Dawki Public school tried to bribe Messi. On the other hand, rejected by Raman, a furious Titli called kavir to meet him the day before the match.
On a sunny spring day, they played one of the vital games of their life. The story features teenage love, dreams of the future, heart brokes and Soccer. The story tells their story of End Semester.
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I'm going to give you an honest review and I'm not going to butter it up, so I'm really sorry if it hurts you. First and foremost thing for any book is it's writing quality. I can see that you are a new writer so don't be discouraged. You have a lot of mistakes and the flow of story is a bit jerky.[img=faceslap] The story concept is looking good and the plot is yet to unfold as long as you can improve your grammar and writing flow your story has potential. More updates will show where this story takes us, till then, do not stop writing. More writing will improve your craft Fighting [img=recommend][img=Loving it]
I‘m still getting a feel of this book, but so far, I like it. It seems promising. Keep going author dearest, we all want to see where all this goes!😊