/ Sci-fi / Space Race, Take Two
概要
Two scientists from the future got sent back in time as a result from an experiment gone wrong. Only, their bodies stayed there, and their mind occupied someone else's.
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This is a work of Fiction, and some of the characters depicted received a lot of modifications and historical inaccuracies. I don't mean to offend anyone with my depiction of this story and I apologize if I do.
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This story posses a lot of potential with well built characters and a good understanding the world it’s set in. The beginning involves lots of action and intrigue but the writing style becomes very monotonous and expeditionary the further you go. There’s a solid idea surrounding the book, though, more showing would balance out the telling.