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Traveling to countless movies, animes, and novels:
Tony Stark: "If I'm Iron Man who's that guy flying in that armored suit?"
Madera Uchiha: "What! That thick eyebrow guy broke my susanoo!! Stop what you're doing!"
Harry Potter: "I thought I'm supposed to fight Voldemort. How come Ron just send a spell that burnt Voldemort into a barbecued chicken?"
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Good fan fic its a world hoping novel so its even better Writing is okey there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but very rarely Overall good novel author is not in a hurry to introduce big or OP world right at the beginning, it starts slow at least the first and the second worlds but it is starting to pick up Good luck
Very nice..... More chaps pls....... Can you do the D.I.C.E world after this...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Writing quality: Tbh your writing quality is pretty good not too many errors but hey man nothing is perfect Stability of update: I gotta give you 5 stars for that you posted 10 chaps 6 days ago and posted like 20 the past day I think? Story development: Well man what do you expect? So far each world he comes back from he lives a whole new life and only gets 10 soul power yes your logic is 1 to 10 is a average human but dang man first world lookism he became more famous then Eminem and a boxing champ maybe give him a little more? One other thing The fact that he has to keep doing these quests till he dies kinda sucks if he doesn't complete the quest he dies. Plus from so for there isn't really any real development mostly it's the same thing so far go do world mission come back with more soul power get smarter make more money boom next world and repeat Character design: How is he not messed up yet? He has lived multiple lives. Yes ik he has higher soul power but come on man he doesn't have the gamer mind or anything? He lived 89 years with the (love) of his life he cries and mourns for a little yes but then he comes back enjoys his youth and thinks about how is soul power can be like conjuror haki from one piece World background: Uh nothing too new compared to canon There you go my review plus hey author if you want a excuse to make your mc op with soul power make the next world mission bleach? Boom he will be very op when he comes. Back from there
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I am at a crossroad here.......I want to give author 5 stars cause his writing, structure and all that **** is GOLD, Large no of chps DOPE........ BUT see, 2 things I just read in this book make me think its trash.they are 1- MC defends some slutty chick that tried get some dude beat up by her BF [who she cheated on] cause that dude was ugly, but then gets almost punched by her BF who found out she was cheating..... MC defends her . 2-Read CHP 9.....relationships are forced as ****......like its shallow, not new author level ****......just shallow..so yah'
The first two are of "lookism "and "true beauty" just jusy perfect and i even shead a single tear at rhe end if "true beauty" but then the idiotic mc becomes is just mind triggering in"ip man"he learned the power of kindness and lazzzyness then it get fucking horrible where he fucking become passive as ****.still gonna read the next are and see if it get bett if not then you know.
OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,OP,AND SO GOOD,GOod,GOOD,GOOD.More chaps.pls.THIS IS THE BEST!!!!
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genuine good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍 keep it up. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 ................................................................
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One of the best story i ever read, but its a shame that you stopped but anyways, nice job .
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A really Great Novel, that I love to read! Good grammar and Story is to be expected. The Story has very emotional moments and the Author brings out the Characters and their feelings very good! I hope to see more ! Thanks for the hard work :D
The plot was interesting so I was expectant. Didn't expect that as soon as the missions began, the development of the story would be very awkward, or should I say forced. I stopped reading at exactly chapter 10.
Do not be fooled!! the author is a Chinese person who disguises himself and writes a novel on Webnovel. From World 1 Looksim And World 2 True Beauty. After the MC completed the 2nd world, the MC in the real world became smart, rich and got a reputation because he created a Google company and etc. But when in the 3rd and 4th world the writer showed his true self in spreading Chinese culture 😤.Starting from the world The 3rd In IP Man World He Becomes A Hero For China And Really Exalts Chinese Culture. After Returning To Earth He Becomes What? He chose to throw away all his wealth and identity as an American just to become a druggist in a small Chinese village and exterminate a gang there. His name changed to Liang. In the 4th world he made a love dog drama with Wu Zentian and became the emperor of the Tang dynasty.
I haven't read it yet, but this synopsis left me confused.....................................................................................................