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Son of Ajuka(DxD fanfic)

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作者: Sawfly_Varte

3.53 (59 レビュー結果)

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Reborn as the son of Ajuka Beelzebub

Basically this is a story of a normal human male reincarnated into the world of DxD

Harem? Of course it's a DxD fic

That's pretty much it, nothing fancy.
I'm bored, so I write
It not great as you can see
please don't bite

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# HAREM

# DEVIL

# REINCARNATION

# ADVENTURE

# ROMANCE

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MyNameIsTea

Lots of incorrect spelling, faults in grammar, and incorrect naming. The story tries really hard at being an appealing novel and could be, but the most likely prerequisite to that would be no foreknowledge about DxD or the ability to simply look up the highly contrasting material. Sadly because the ease of which looking up said material or already having the knowledge is so widespread the amount of "AU" the novel tries to employ makes it more something using DxD mechanics. There is a lot of butchering a lot of already known knowledge for not much reason or purpose other than the sake of the author saying "Why not because I can?" This is fine but not my cup of tea. There is already pre-established lore and information of this world that don't need much changing until the character is introduced. The biggest one would be the Astaroth clan trait, being completely justified as something entirely different all with the thought "That's weird thus happened to me without much reason. Ok cool no need to think about this anymore." The ability to control temperature can be done with magic, calculation speed is something much more passive, along with being both stronger and balanced. It seems more like the author was trying to justify not writing a character with a functioning brain. (This isn't about the clan trait needed to form thoughts its mainly both the author and mc have very flawed thinking and logic.) It might have been best for the author at this point to say that mc was a test tube baby as it would complement some pre-established knowledge on Ajuka or if that isn't even the most needed selling point then just make him a Sitri. That would help the clan trait along with solving having an mc who could form well functioning ideas and a water based clan trait. The hard on in which the author has on gunslinger is another issue that pertains with the overall pre-established world of DxD. This is pretty much a flawed idea because at its base all major opponents in the story are able to withstand normal guns or move faster. It's just the overpowered standing of the world. Justifying a gun that isn't a sacred gear or something realisticly is mainly used against cannon fodder is not well thought out. The same comparable nature of a magic empowered beefed up bullet from a gun in which could be destroyed or taken away, can be accomplished with magic. Create a compressed bullet made from devil magic and if the mc wishes to pursue magic of other pantheons could overlay it with those or simply train their ability to shoot a magical bullet to the same standard. This is just some tidbits on why this is overall flawed logic. I would like to add that I'm not trying to express any desire of putting holes in the story or crying out in how bad it is, these are my genuine criticisms that if can be addressed would help let the story be more fleshed out and less of a wish fulfillment. if wish fullfillment is what you are going for then completely disregard this comment.

2yr 61

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LV 4

Lenny_Lake

That fic is so generic i can hear music . I mean there is nothing interesting going on the mc is not fun to follow and its like reading the same thing as countless other dxd Fics

2yr 38

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LV 13

KnightShade420

I will be honest this story disappointed me too much. I hate how the author somehow made becoming ultimate class devils so easy. Making the MC super strong can be explained away with saying he had the same super devil potential his father had but making Rias and Sona just as powerful as him is just too much. First of all most high class devils are not actually high class because being from a noble clan they automatically become high class. Rias and Sona were at the lower end of high class in canon and with that the author decided that just with a couple hours of training every day for a year or so 9 year old Rias and Sona can be just as powerful as their canon self and by the time they reach their canon age be more powerful then Kokabiel a fallen angel who is probably considered in the higher tear of ultimate class beings. Vali Killed him in a spike because he was already in the lower tear of god class beings. Sairaorg Bael considered to be the youngest ultimate class among the devils was because he trained like his life depended on it so he is considered an exception not the rule of devils becoming ultimate class at that age. Plus author considers Raynare's potential to be 2 pawns which makes absolutely no sense. The chess pieces considers the potential of the being reincarnated as relative to the devil reincarnating the being. So an ultimate class being reincarnating a trash 2 wings angel like Raynare costing two Pawns just was the last straw for me. The whole story line just irritated me.

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2yr 35

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LV 14

Sword_1mmortal

If it not for the guy hard carrying this fanfic by spamming five star reviews, this story wouldn't have such a high review. I went back to reread it and yeah, I just can't get into it.

2yr 16

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