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follow Daniel in his jorney on the MCU world while he becomes the best "hero".
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Very good story and very entertaining. I just hope they take out that summoning thing since it is enough with the powers of SOLDIER BOY and as long as his personality is the same obviously less racist We are happy.
You do know you can just skip the whole child hood thing right?. Nobody like to know about how he train and Suff, we all know how his power gonna turn out. What a let down.
Grammarly has a free version. For the love of god and all that's holy, download Grammarly man! It is so distracting to read stupid mistakes in spelling and grammar.
Much of what I have to say about this story amounts to : Its a interesting idea and I want to see where this goes. while there could be some improvements to writing errors, I have suffered worse reads so its fine too me. Read this story if you want a promising story.
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
Boa história, alguns pequenos erros de ortografia mas ótima história aguardando novos lançamentos .....................................................................................................
the stroy so far is really good can't wait for it to continue ...................................................................
Yeah,this is a great story. I just hope the author continues it and doesn't abandon this masterpiece.. [Unrelated,but uh,how do people get past the needs one hundred and fifty character / words thing?? Like I would write wayyyy more reviews if that wasn't there,I'd appreciate any help you can give(and yes I am on my phone) ]
Great story Give him serums through consumables and better character synchro and we'll be cruising . ................................. .......................
good story 😉 good luck 🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🤩🥳🤩😞🥳🤩🥳🤩🥳🤩🤩
Good read. Need more stories like this tbh. Keep it up 👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽
is it original or translation if translation link plz or if original please continue updating thank you.......................................
I have high hopes for your fic. The premise in itself is good enough, but the summon( unique and not cliche characters) which I thought would be bad is starting to look good. I hope you dont drop this and take your time to ensure the quality stays good and could you reconsider taking a big harem (again ensure quality?)
Very good story so far is really good can't wait for it to continue .....................................................................................
La historia de nota que será buena y me gusta más que el ambiente vaya aser mas o menos como en los cómics y la actualización es buena mientras cumpla
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